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by cko

schedule September 8, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I really wish you would've continued the story. This type of story is one of the ones that shouldn't be left concluded due to the massive cliffhanger you left it at.

 

Don't worry, I've been thinking about continuing it in the first place.

schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i remember this from FF.net..hm seems they are getting prudish there..anyways you should continue this story :D
person maderine
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked this. Well "liked"... It's pretty disturbing, but as someone else said, that's real life. So many Ranma fics are so over the top, and then there's this one. I don't think Akane was OOC at all. Given, this sort of subject matter was never dealt with in the series, but I can see Akane being stubborn and proud and impulsive enough to do something like this and then regret it. And she will, of course; probably for the rest of her life. Not to mention Ryouga, and probably Ranma too when/if he finds out. Funny how such a fleeting act can leave such increbidle scars. But anyway.
person Michael
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it please keep going. I'd love to see how she would explain the bloody sheets to Kasume. Hope to see an updatesoon!!!!!!!!!!!
person Kimmychan
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...THIS WAS TAKEN OF FANFICTION.NET? THOSE BASTARDS! I saw this on Fanfiction.net before but I never got the chance to comment. I liked it very much!

This is very realistic and a very good fanfic. I would LIKE to see the what happens next if you want to continue. Akane seems like herself and she does have a naturally good character. I'm sure that it could've happened to anybody.
person BB
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the style of your fiction - it may not be absolutely in character, but you gave a pretty good explanation, why things happen the way they do.
I loved, how realistic you described Akane's feelings - it's absolutely believable!
Good work - write on!

Love,

BB
person mike
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh god Akane is THE pettyest Shallow, and Pathetic bitch ive ive read! I hope to GOD you don't make Ranma penetrate that slut. What was with the hair at the tip of his dick!? some sort of thing that happends when not being circumcized? that scen was just gross! IF you continued this i hope Ranma finds out and repeats the things ive mentioned before. Then goes and screws the brains out of Ukyo & Shampoo. Mabey even Kodachi who i'd never want him to consider on normal occasions. Sad thing is Akane is usually my favorite pairing w/ Ranma.
person Kinnara
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
There's two parts? Oh em gee. You must please update soon. I would definately love to see more of your work.

xxxx-Kinnara
person saemi
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh wow, this is not what I expected! I hope you continue it, the realism of this fic really makes it different from other fics, but I really like it. good job!
person it's true
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That sucks that people on FF.net got so mad at you for this. It IS a little disturbing, but it's real life. Who knows what Akane would be like if she were real? Anyway, I think you're a really goodauthor, and fuck what all the other people say.

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