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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That sucks that people on FF.net got so mad at you for this. It IS a little disturbing, but it's real life. Who knows what Akane would be like if she were real? Anyway, I think you're a really goodauthor, and fuck what all the other people say.
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fuck you anonymous!
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what did u do?!oh my gosh! i really have to b honest...it was crap, how could u?!
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Of course you should bother.You have to.What did you wwrite first chapter for.Nobody was really supposed to like the lemon there.
Am I right? Then what are you hesitating for? Update!!!
Am I right? Then what are you hesitating for? Update!!!
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\'The hair on the tip\' part was kinda disgusting but extemely funny.LOL
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
rather intresting fic keep up the good work
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oho you\'re not the only one with a sex-ed class.i have too and it has three parts.talk about hell.anyway do keep up with th updates!
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good job, this is a good story so far n.n please continue! *hugs*
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good first chapter, I like it! It\'s compelling, and I hope you do write more, because I want to know what happens. I thought your sex scene between Akane and Ryouga was really well done...I know more than a few people who\'ve had similarly unfortunate experiences, though I don\'t think they ever had quite as much of a train-wreck afterwards =P.
On a side note, why did Ryouga\'s penis have hair on it? That would have to be some kind of serious deformation, because though the pubic region is hairy, the actual penis is smooth and hairless, since it\'s designed to fit inside the vagina like a key in a lock up to the cervix, for ideal reproductive purposes...i guess maybe sex-ed didn\'t get even that far =P
Its a shame that they scrapped your sex-ed program. My recommendation to you: go to the nearest book store and get \"The Better Sex Guide\" by Nitya Lacroix, because it\'s got more than just techniques, it\'s also got a section on anatomy and health. Share it with your friends too...if the responsible adults won\'t help you, better to read about it first than just jump in head first and pray that you don\'t fuck up!
Any way, great first chapter, I hope to see another sometime!
On a side note, why did Ryouga\'s penis have hair on it? That would have to be some kind of serious deformation, because though the pubic region is hairy, the actual penis is smooth and hairless, since it\'s designed to fit inside the vagina like a key in a lock up to the cervix, for ideal reproductive purposes...i guess maybe sex-ed didn\'t get even that far =P
Its a shame that they scrapped your sex-ed program. My recommendation to you: go to the nearest book store and get \"The Better Sex Guide\" by Nitya Lacroix, because it\'s got more than just techniques, it\'s also got a section on anatomy and health. Share it with your friends too...if the responsible adults won\'t help you, better to read about it first than just jump in head first and pray that you don\'t fuck up!
Any way, great first chapter, I hope to see another sometime!
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, this is such a great fic. Please please please continue with it, I hate it when I like a fic and then the author never concludes it. So please don\'t do that, give me closure!