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August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good so far, though I must admit that the last two chapters had me confused as to what was going on. I'm pretty sure though when more has been posted, that confusion will clear up.
As for grammar and other things, I can't really judge that ( as I royally suck at grammar ^^; ), but from what I can tell, its all good. :-) It rare to come across a story that is well written where the spelling and grammar is coherent.
Hope to be able to read more on this story soon. :-)
SilverFox =^.^=
P.S. I can't believe I ran into this story again after two years and 14 days ( damn that's odd too! )! Its been a LONG time since I've read this. I can't remember much of the first one, but this one is pretty awesome. :-) Keep up the good work!
As for grammar and other things, I can't really judge that ( as I royally suck at grammar ^^; ), but from what I can tell, its all good. :-) It rare to come across a story that is well written where the spelling and grammar is coherent.
Hope to be able to read more on this story soon. :-)
SilverFox =^.^=
P.S. I can't believe I ran into this story again after two years and 14 days ( damn that's odd too! )! Its been a LONG time since I've read this. I can't remember much of the first one, but this one is pretty awesome. :-) Keep up the good work!
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story...I've enjoyed it very much and I can't wait for the next chapters to come out...
I'm not really a Samurai Deeper Kyo fan...More like a Jak and Daxter game fan...but your story has caught my attention...
Update very soon please!
~GMB~
I'm not really a Samurai Deeper Kyo fan...More like a Jak and Daxter game fan...but your story has caught my attention...
Update very soon please!
~GMB~
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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really like this version :) Glad I found it on here, I was reading it on fanfiction.net but kept getting errors cus they're having problems with the site. Hope you continue soon.
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic and felt severly upset when it ended in a cliffy. Please update soon!!!!
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! The cliffhangers, the cliffhangers!
Okay, melodramatics aside, I would really appreciate if you finished the fic. Because it rocks, the characters are portrayed amazingly well, and it is an original storyline that is very addicting. Umm...any more reasons...? Ah. Yes. Please?
Okay, melodramatics aside, I would really appreciate if you finished the fic. Because it rocks, the characters are portrayed amazingly well, and it is an original storyline that is very addicting. Umm...any more reasons...? Ah. Yes. Please?
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was a One Shot T_T I shall keep reading cuz I got hooked wah!
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved that character you added she\'s hilarious I can imagine her smiling like yukimura somehow and torturing kyo at the same time \' , \'
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whattttt! It\'s not done how could you T_T aww
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
plsssssss!!!!!!! continue with the writing. i cant wait to read the next chapter!!!! i like your work.... so pls continue on behalf of all the readers out there whom love your work. *_*
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
reeeeeeaaally glad that it wasn\'t a one-shot.... please up date soon... i\'m quite intrigued