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Galileo would be very turned on.

*LOL* Normally I gush with at least a decent sized review, but *sigh* there isn\'t much to say, it\'s beautiful and very alluring. A rather nice abstract erotic piece.

WHY WAS I NOT TOLD OF THIS FIC!!!!!! This is freaking awesome! I want to commend you on bringing some type of closure to this section of the story. This could not have been more elegantly worded and I am proud to read something as beautiful as this. I am so glad you decided to share your talent and type A personality with the world (at least this little section of it!)

Love ya...Mean it!
PuffMonkey

*thoroughly roughs you up with glompage* Why you...you brilliant cup *falls over dead*. I\'m touched, thank you so much! This was so amazing, I don\'t even know how many times I re-read it just to make sure I wasn\'t missing anything. First off, I\'m loving the sun, moon, and earth analogies. So many outstanding layers interwoven with one another. And oh, you subtle genius, so effectively using reciprocity; the major one being earth and gravity *falls over dead again*. Love how your cigars are never cigars; how the simple act of touching a scar becomes so freaking complex. And the comment about the light at the end of her tunnel seemed like such an afterthought at first, but you blew my mind with it! So much about her\'s and Gonou\'s relationship/personalities/interactions is implied in that one little sentence. Unbelievable how, although this fic centered around the \'act\' (lol), you expanded far beyond that and turned it into something delightfully complicated for a surreal feel. Interesting way of melding influential parts of the past and future to create such a compelling present. I\'m so glad you posted this, I loved it! You\'re fabulous ^_^

*sighs happily and runs off to finally read the latest RaHO*

A wonderfully poingent tale that shows a glimmer of hope for our most favourite tortoured demon soul. The last bit was heart-warming at it\'s best. Please don\'t stop writing these happy little bits.

Its beautiful. You have such a way with words its unbelievable, it didn\'t feel like a lemon, it was almost like a blanket-fiction. It made me all wistful and good. The metaphor and story blend so well together that the extract stands on its own beautifully. I was enchanted by it.

I SHALL BE THE FIRST TO REVIEW!

Utterly confused me, and that\'s why I love it. I\'m pretty sure I saw this before, like how you said it was a snippet from another fiction. Is it RAHO the first one, right? I dunno. Though I may be a hardcore smut fan, this was nice. You never cease to empress me, Cupnjava! (Blows kiss.)


Always a fan!


~Clojaku