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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that wasn\'t bad at all, it was very well writen in my opinion, made me really care about what was going on with the characters
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March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I loved this story!! i never thought Ken as a vouyer eheehe...when the sequel comes? I\'ll be waiting!!! brazilian kisses!
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February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait to next chapter! Little more space and it\'ll be great! ;)
And I think Ken should be with Omi XD (yes.... I\'m a big YxA, CxS, OxK fan) :>
Keep writing!
And I think Ken should be with Omi XD (yes.... I\'m a big YxA, CxS, OxK fan) :>
Keep writing!
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February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yum! Very nice, the detail making it easy to visualize.
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February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice story. It was well written and hot. Pay attention to your spacing it was a little hard to read. and I think you should take your time when the characters are verbally interacting. Keep up the good work.