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That was hot, quick but hot. A lot of enthusiasm. Poor Yahiko, but at his age shouldn't it be turn on? Anyway, I say go for another chap. or rather follow up one-shot. I say Kaoru is waiting to meet MIsao for lunch where kenshin just happens to be luncheon with tomoe and they are having an argument. he realizes how hot kaoru is when he sees her and is even sorrier about the break up when misao finally gets there and he seed how they are with each other. They taunt him and tease him giving him a little show, tomoe obviously gets pissed and leaves. The girls douse him with a cold drink and go home to celebrate their victory over the redhead the best way they know how.

Sorry bout that. Getting too into it. Well I'll keep an eye out for any follow up. Definitely enjoyed this and I'm not big on yaoi/yuri but yours was fun.

that was beautiful i masturbated over it a suqual with megumi too please god that was hot

good story i just have one qwetion how did u get the picture on the page when you search for authers

Yeah that was definitely rushed. It's hard but you've got to make sure an take your time to make the story special. A suggestion would be to have Kaoru and Misao already know each other, that would make the story go quicker without actually skipping any details. Also, and it's your story so feel free to ignore me, starting further on and explaining as you go is a good way to get to what you really want, the sex.

Man...That was Sweet!!! I love Misao/Kaoru lemons....They\'re just so energetic in bed together! ~_^ You did an awesome job on this fic; I love how Misao was portrayed as such a naughty girl.... Ehehehe. Anyway, this really made my day. I had so much fun with this fic. =D