rate_review Reviews

Great story even if the chapters are a bit short, haha. I really like the way you set this up of Yoh taking in Hao and taking on some traits of him. I know it's quite the long time since you updated but I would love to see more!

Crimson13

this is interesting, but im a little confused... what pairing is this? Slash or het? PErsonnaly i hope that its slash and hao/yoh or amidamaru/yoh. if its not can you say in any chapters that you post? THanks! XX

This is an awesome story. I like the fact that Yoh decided to have his hair long like Hao's and that they combined into a single person. Please continue this story and I can't wait to see another chapter on it!

I am enjoying the story so far; however, I would not appreciate a yaoi pairing. There are far too many of them for Shaman King. Personnally I like your writing style, and the character development mainly Yoh and Anna is very imaginative. While I am not opposed to yaoi pairings, I just enjoy heterosexual more. Easier to relate too from my point of view. If there were equal amounts of good yaoi and hetero I wouldn\'t have a problem, but in this catagory they are unequal. Good for me is well written with a plot, and not just sex. So I look forward to your next installment.

Demon God Iceheart signing off!

This is cool...*thinks of Yoh with shoulder length hair..Drools* HELLO! lol for twins they dont soudn anythinga liek or really look alike...haos way more.....okay scracth that i cant remeber seeing yoh w/o a shirt...lol okay so update soon k?
Emial me when ya do
Later days

XD aw I wanted yaoi~~ *spins around* XD This fic ish goood.... you should have some triangles in here *shifty eyes*

This is a great story so far! I like how you\'ve managed to intergrate Hao and Yoh together. Then your making Anna have issues about Hao without her even knowing she has issues, it\'s just great. Keep up the good work!

The story is going very well. I was just thinking of something you might be able to work into your story (you can take it or shoot it, it doesn\'t matter to me) why don\'t you try and have Yoh, but that Hao\'s spirit is having a slight affect on him, or something. You know, a sort of influence (and not the just the hair!) not an influence for character ideals or opinions, but just...i don\'t know...the calmness andmysteriousness of Hao (if you get what i\'m saying) anyhoo! just thought i\'d pass that along! other than that i\'m really enjoying your fic! please update soon!

IM so happy ^^ it\'s finally YohXAnna I get sick of all that GAY crap ^^;;;

yesssssssss! this is the eact kind of story i\'ve been dying to read. ^^ please up date soon.