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for Unrequited?

by cupnjava

person sohmamomiji
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*cries from all the love*

This was so beautitul and heart-felt, it brought tears to my eyes! ^_^

\O/ *standing ovation* \O/

And thank you for giving them a happy ending. ^_^ Part one (though it was beautifully written) had me feeling so terrible for them!
person Heather
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww! how sad! this is so beautifully written. throughout reading this, the overwhelming sense of loneliness comes through so forcefully...but, not in a bad way. it's almost as if i can feel what hakkai and gojyo are feeling, those intense emotions that no amount of will can squelch. you have a real talent for creating the mood. you capture it perfectly in this. great job!
person Jamie
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know what? It\'s official; you\'re my favorite author. Not in my top five, my favorite. Damn. Everyone of the stories you write and I find, I end up loving. This one included.
person teresa
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Do you see that? ~ points to spot on floor ~

That\'s me..... I\'ve been reducec to a big puddle of gooo.

I hope I can pull myself together before someone comes along and mops me up. XD
person DayastJoy
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant how you can write a story so laugh-out-loud funny and so tenderly heartfelt at the same time. Really enjoyed this one, thanks for sharing, it really brightened my day. I found this bit exceptionally hilarious, very Gojyo, and so well described I can almost see the anime sequence in my mind: (Gojyo shook his head, “Not a damn bit.” His bottom lip began to quiver and he shoved a cigarette between his lips to cap his emotions. “Just as long as it exists in spite of my hair.” He was more peculiar about his fuck of the night than whoever would love him.) Please write more!

person Shadowfox13
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh well done CJ! Bravo! That was really nice. poignant and wistful, very touching. I love it when you write.
person guanyin-kun
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn! I love a good love story...especially if it has a happy ending.
person Flamingolo
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, that was so great. I must say that you are the atmosphere queen, hands down; again, it felt very heavy, but more empty and nostalgic, creating such a lovely melancholy. Outstanding job, wish I had more time to give a thorough review. Keep up the excellent work!
person PuffMonkey
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH ARE YOU GOING TO GET IT CUPNJAVA!!! Yet another fic I had no idea about. Don\'t worry I\'m not mad at you but it seems that even your little fics carry so much of your others that it is hard to tell where one begins and another ends (as it should be). I love your work and will continue to be your biggest fan and friend.

Love ya...Mean it!
PuffMonkey
person Paisley
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is there anything you can\'t do??

*massive hug*

Hurry up with RAHO-A, cause I am going crazzzzzzzy.

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