rate_review Reviews

I really enjoyed this, it's quite good. Well written, good spelling (nothing takes away from a good story like bad spelling) Very well done. You may want to look pver it for double words and a fewinstances of 'the he' and such.

I agree with you, there are not enough K/R fics, I love the pairing myself and you write both sides exceedingly well. an excellent use of Japanese too. Not too much, but enough. I applaud your writing skill and will be looking forward to the sequel.

for your first yaoi fic that was SO good! you have no idea and I am surprised at the lack of yaoi pairings in here, it's sad really:/ anyway yeah I definetly loved it!_!

WOW! That's one of the best K/R yaoi fanfics I've ever read. Plz keep writing. You can't really tell that's ur 1st. U should be very pround of ur self ^-^

I really, really like this. The character dynamics are realistic (and cute!) and for your first yaoi scene it was incredibly hot. I'd love any sort of a sequel, or even another PWP featuring our boys. Thanks for the great work.

~Loki

Whoa... Really? This is your first yaoi fic? O_O *is impressed* For your first yaoi fanfic, you did a tremendous job. It was a sweet and romantic Ryou/Keiichiro story that really made me smile. (I, also, think that Ryou and Keiichiro make a cute pairing. lol) ^__^ The action flowed nicely at a reasonable pace. There was good imagery and word use. Etc... Basically, your story rocked! LOL

Keep up the great work!

Anonymous Miss

NICELY WRITTEN. LOVED IT. I THOUGHT ABOUT THIS MYSELF. SOMTIMES DREAMED THAT THIS WOULD COME TRUE, BUT NOT AS DEEPLY. GOOD JAPP. TOO. KEPT STUDYING AND WRITTING.><

YAY i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^ ^-^ thankys

When I first saw your fic I was like, \"OMIGOD!!! There\'s a RyouxKeiichiro fic in existence after all!\" ^^ I read it and....................... It was frigen GREAT!!!!!!!!!! Hell yeah you should make a sequel! But you should make it kinda longer.... \'cause it\'s not everyday you come by a great story line and a talented author to write it! Sooooooo it\'d be so cool if you could type up a nice \'n long fic, never end it and always update! ^^ heh heh heh you don\'t have ta listen to me but that would be so frigen awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! O_o I wuv you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >_< Ja\'ne!



Your new and ever devoted fan,
~Lurel

Great story, veeeery well written!! I loved it!! XD Keep up the good work and write more K/R!!! :DD