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for Midnight Watch

by pikari

person The fallen strawberry
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THIS STORY TOTALLY ROCKS!!!!!
Dude (or chick..w/e) you gotta make anoter chap or something...
I also agree, there needs to be more KeiichiroXRyou pairings...
Maybe I\'ll try one ^.^;
person Aiko Etsu
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hiya!^^ I usually don\'t review the fanfics I read on here but I decided I just had to for you. I completely agree, there\'s not enough yaoi TMM fanfics with Keiichiro as seme. (not that I\'m not open to the other way around) but I like to see the switch. I absolutely LOVED your fic!!!! You kept them well in character and still made it nice and yummy! *licks lips* I didn\'t look to see how many reviews you\'ve gotten yet but I TOTALLY vote you write up that second part to this! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!! I\'D TOTALLY LOVE YOU FOR IT!!! (NOT that I don\'t already love you for this chapter!) PLEASE UPDATE!
Love you, e-mail me if you want. ^^
*hugs*

(amara_kou27@yahoo.com)
person Tsuyomi
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There\'s so many good things to say about this fic I\'m not sure where to start! For one, I enjoyed reading this. It is a well-written and tasteful lemon, something hard to come across these days. I like your writing style a lot; the descriptions were vivid and there was no visible grammatical errors. Overall, a wonderful job on your first yaoi fic! (I agree, there should be more TMM shonen ai/yaoi fanfiction!) I hope you do decide to write a sequel...I will look forward to it! :)
person Anon
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay K/R! If you hadn\'t said anything, I\'d have never guessed that was your first yaoi. You should definately write a sequel!
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.... The first TMM fic I\'ve read... very nice. I watched like two episodes of the stupid kiddy americanized anime, and I wanted to write a fic about them, but I couldn\'t find out Keiicharo\'s name! (Gr!) Anyway... very nice. I have no critcism to offer.... I think it was perfect.
person Kylara
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wai~~~!! I\'ve been looking fro a KeiichiroxRyou fic, and I\'m soooo happy with what I found! Sugoi! I hope you write more using this pairing, or any pairing, really! ^^~
person gelatinoussugar
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh...TMM yaoi...my favorite! (Besides YGO yaoi, of course!) It really is true that KeiichiroxRyou ficcies are IMPOSSIBLE to find. *Has spent hours online looking* So, you are one of my many heros for this lemon. You, Bardicsidhe, ykarzel, etc... *List goes on for a few pages* Now if I could write a half-decent lemon...that\'d be a miracle. *Writing rocks, lemons suck* And it would ba an actual excuse to get an AFF username. (Old ficcie would\'ve worked here...*Heh*) I\'m assuming this is a one-shot, so WRITE A NEW ONE! Arigatou! ^__^
person Justin
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NYA! *squirms happily* I\'m so happy to see some naughty yaoi, and everything seemed to perfect. The innocence and love that the two had for one another *swoons* It was beautiful. Great job!
person shadowz
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. The way you write the characters is beleivable and very real I hope you continue writing and I look forward to reading more of your fics in the future.
person saturn
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was the first good yaoi tokyo mew mew story on this net!!!!keep up the good work!!!!(>^_^<)

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