rate_review Reviews

I really enjoyed reading this ^^. I first saw your stuff on ff-net, but I figured that you, (like Befanini) were probably on this site as well- and I wasn\'t disapointed.

Re the lube-- actually... ahm... you don\'t... need it... It certainly helps, but... x.x;; (ladeda not like I\'m speaking from experience or anything <<; )

Aw cute! very nice and i liked it a lot.

Awww. Nicely written. Your language is beautiful.

That was soooooo sweet, and it was actually believable, that it could happen that way. Thanks for sharing.

I just read your update and I have to say that this was just as wonderful as the first part. I love the way you write Hakkai and Gojyo. You have a great balance between humor, tenderness and that fear we all have after the first time of what if it was a mistake. I look forward to reading more of your works.

Oh......my...... THIS WAS SOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOOD. I agree with your lack of lube, it would have ruined the flow of things. I hope you update soon, I really do. I love your writeing stile, its very fluid and sets thee mood without actualy haveing to discribe it strait forward.

I have to say this was a beautiful story. So much tenderness between two loving friends, it was perfect. I hope you do write the morning after i can\'t wait to see how you do it.

This was very tender, very beautiful and very true to character. A great read, and I love the rhythm of the flow. You captured Gojyo\'s depth of nature and inherent kindness perfectly, and the conversation was hilarious and profound at the same time, much in the spirit of the series. Thank you for sharing this well crafted story -- I\'m eagerly looking forward to part 2.

This is a great interesting story. keep it going.

Crimson,

Good show! Excellent! You’re right, the actions are extremely believable and your writing is very smooth. My eyes just slid down the screen yearning for the next line.

I thought your choice of tense was interesting. Present tense -- that’s an unusual way to write and you handled it superbly.

Your verbiage was on point and the line spacing was wonderful! Excellent. You should really write more. Eloquent and fully flushed out while not being verbose -- bravo. I adore the simplicity with which you handled the Kanan thing while establishing a reciprocity of feelings between the two men.

I’ve been dying to do a rain scene myself -- one’s been planned so please don’t feel I stole it from you.

Ah lube, tricky lube --- it does indeed get in the way and the smooth transition of your positioning was excellent. I’ll suspend disbelief for you anytime.

Thank you so much for sharing and I am looking forward to the next installment.

Cupnjava c[~]~~~*sip*