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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This should be taken down. It was horrible. Take it down. Or at the least give it a major edit.
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a soul touching masterpiece.
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude. This is Fucked up! XD!!! Its like a poorly writen anime/hentai version of Scary Movie.
And I agree you need to work on your writing skills.
And I agree you need to work on your writing skills.
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absoulutely fucking hillarious. This has to be the best parody I have read in ages.
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL well first 2 chaps made me laugh, I hope you had fun writing it. If it was a bit more organized and made just a \"little\" sense I would seriously love reading this. keep working on it.
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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I pretty much agree with the anonymous. This is good lemons, but poorly written. You need to work a little on your writing, k? Not saying it\'s bad, but...just work on it, ok?
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March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what the fuck! this story made my head hurt. stop just stop!