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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG I LOVE THI SSTORY SO FAR!!!! Are you seriously having trouble finding a beta? BECAUSE I WOULD ADORE BEING UR BETA!!!! lol thanx for the great fanfic, when will chapter 6 go up?
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oo, I really like this. ^^ I have my own story of my OC dealing with Leukemia, and I've got a ton of reasearch printed out. I like how yours is more simplex than what I have in mind for mine. XD Email meh some time ^^
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i thought this was a great story and i hope u write more!
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it\'s kind of too sad. can lighten it up a bit
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you need help writing the lemon. I can help ya. Email me or AIM me.
aim= ajones6302
email= ajones6302@elp.rr.com
I have written nothing but M/F scenes, so I think I can help you. I love Chi/Hideki stories, so please contact me.
aim= ajones6302
email= ajones6302@elp.rr.com
I have written nothing but M/F scenes, so I think I can help you. I love Chi/Hideki stories, so please contact me.
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September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have made Chi a little too human. The is a line where she prays and that is out of character. I cannot think of a way for Hideki to live without magic or superscience. The only thing that comes to mind is haveing Minoru pay for a clone to be made. Still the clone would start out as a baby. Maybe Chi could then be his \'mother\'. Memories are not saved so the clone would be a new person. Clones also have shorter lifespans than the originals. Something about teleomeres. Otherwise the fic is good. Spelling needs to be corrected though.
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
depressing. =( im going to continue reading this story because its well written as long as i can but depressing things arent really something i like ta read.
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*dies* I cannot WAIT for the next chapter...you will update soon right?
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O poor hideki, I dont want him to die! Hey if you have a mailing list add me cause i think your story is great.
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Esxellent start, this could carry on to be an excellent story! It\'s a little hard to guage from what little there is but i hope that will be more.
Good work!
Good work!