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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please write more of your story. Chobits isn\'t getting a lot of stories and yours is the best so far. Please contine!
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tamashii here! I loved the story, I do hope you continue, I also hope you don\'t kill Hie on us, that wouldn\'t be very good. Well please do continue and I look forward to an update from you.
Tamashii
Tamashii
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, alright, update soon! I really want to now what will happen to Hideki!
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love what you have here so far cant wait to read more
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very sad very angsty MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER DAMNIT!
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Original, I must say. A problem that even Chii would be hard-pressed to understand. Please have him survive for a while, at least: it will destroy her, in the end, if he dies. Otherwise, keep on going. You truly have an original direction for this particular couple.
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eh, like you said, the grammar\'s kinda bad, but at least you know that. I\'ve quite a few \"writers\" who think their writing is perfect despite the opinions of others and constructive criticism. But your first chapter is cool. I wanna see what happens next.
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It felt more like a romance fic than a sex fic. You\'ve put out the setup here, so it could end up as a good story, be there has to be an act two.
The other thing is, and I\'m not sure how you\'re going to get around it, people dying of cancer aren\'t really in a position to have hot steamy sex. So how you solve that problem is going to influence whether the story ultimately comes out okay.
The other thing is, and I\'m not sure how you\'re going to get around it, people dying of cancer aren\'t really in a position to have hot steamy sex. So how you solve that problem is going to influence whether the story ultimately comes out okay.
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this actually sounds like it is going to be good pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee update soon.
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March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story i like where this is going so far. Keep it up.