rate_review Reviews

i loved this story it brought tears to my eyes when i think about all those fights and near death experiences the've i think they all need a little down time especially sanzo and goku

wow, really close to canon!

love the whole \'on top\' agrument.

This not my favorite pairing, but I really like how you presented them.

I like the relationship dynamic as you wrote it. Your characterizations were excellent and I thought it was rather sweet that Goku so clearly identified Sanzo’s unique ways of conveying affection.

Keeping with my “speeches” on reviews, a point of critique -- some sections seemed a little rushed. We’re not under a word count limit here. Take all the time you need to tell us what you want to tell us. Of course, you could have rushed on purpose because they were unimportant to what you wanted to tell us. Additionally, it was a bit unsettling to see the word “boy” during the lemon, but I’m sure that’s just me. I’m positive that’s just me because many people don’t mind at all.

Your style is very clear. Again the characterizations as well as the relationship dynamic were excellent.

Thank you for taking the time to write this and share it with us.

Cupnjava c[~]~~~*sip*