rate_review Reviews

Nice! Great fic! Loved the pairings, BTW... Poor Yaone - too bad she didn't end up with anyone.

I absilutlt loved it. Great job. ^_^

Ned: You love... I... I... Wait, that came out all wrong didn't it? Right, lemme start that one over. I LOVE YOU! That writing's awesome! That's a kick ass story. Is there going to be a next time? A squel? Anything like that? I can't help it, that was awesome writing. I've read some interesting and screwed up things but you actually did really, really, really, really, really well! You managed to keep everybody in character almost all the time. At those times where they were sketchy with characterization, it was something heart-felt that you could almost never actually see them doing (in the manga or shows(not that much of any of this would happen); like opening up emotionally for someone else, and even then you managed to keep their attitudes plausible for such a situation. THANK YOU SO MUCH! for writing this story. :D
Kry: My thoughts exactly. It was one of the best aff's that I've read in a looooooooooooonnnnggg time. Arigato Dayast_Joy-san. It was a friggin' good read. PEACE OUT and keep on writing or I'll "borrow" Sanzo's Smith&Wesson. =D
Ned: =d <---- IT'S PICKING IT'S NOSE WITH IT'S FUCKING TONGUE!... Sorry, this random thought commercial brought to you by Ned & Kry Inc.

Only had time to read this chapter for now but will read the others later. I think you have done a wonderful job and i just love it cant wait to read the other chapters

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Aw! cute cute cute cute cute!

That was wonderful. I loved it. I....gosh. ((speechless))

~Les.
Speaketh the Truth.

I’m FINALLY getting to read and review this.

Good job. I really like the presentation of all the couples.

I’ll be honest, it felt a little rushed in some spots. Those were what I call “tool plots” or “justification plots” so it’s not that big of a deal, but in the future remember the saying “Show the reader don’t tell them.”

We’re all guilty of that. No big deal.

Other than that, I think you did a great job. Technically this was sound. The characterizations are wonderful. Your Sanzo is in keeping with the anime. The manga Sanzo tends to be used more in fanfics, because he is a bit softer. You are brave and crafty. You pulled it off and pulled it off well.

I like the closeness that seems to be building between Gojyo and Dou. That is wonderful. I’m glad you are paying attention to that “needs healing” situation. I appreciate you presenting Gojyo as insightful and Hakkai being a little nervous of Sanzo himself. Gojyo is often presented as less than bright and Hakkai is often presented as getting away with too much when it comes to Sanzo. Both perspective have valid points, but I appreciate seeing this perspective.

“They must be a match made in heaven. Somewhere, Sanzo could swear a God was laughing.” That had me laughing out loud.

I look forward to your upcoming pieces, thank you so much for sharing.

Cupnjava c[~]~~~*sip*

The preceding review was written under precious little sleep, please forgive me.

Wow after a long absence I am back and have rediscovered your lovely story. Chapter 2. Oh my.. very nice job on Hakkai and Goyjo\'s love scene. It was hot and passionate yet very playful and loving. Great job! Then onto Kou and his fears. I think Dou needs to knock some sense into him. I liked tha fact that you pointed out how Kou did not mind being uke since it let hive give up his much vaunted control.. at least for a little while. Yet is was this lack of control that caused his argument with Dou. He needs some straightning out. Oh and I wanted to point out that even though Hakkai is seme he is no pushover. I tend to not like radically submissive seme\'s. Then onto Sanzo and Goku.... Perhaps this brush with death can open Sanzo\'s eyes a bit. Oh man what a cliffhanger!! I am happily running off to read the next chapter. I am so glad I found you again and you are doing a phenominal job!
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Amy

Ok Sanzo is being an ass. But then he is really good at that. (Bravo for capturing him so well.) I want to kick him in the behind. He is so stubborn! I love the fact that you have made Goyjo as sort of a extoller of wisdom in this chapter. I loved the advice he gave Kou and then Goyjo thinking about his role in life. That of a concerned, caring person who genuinely loves his friends. Hurrah to Lirin for waking Bro! I am also so glad that Kou and Dou made up. Excellent chapter dear! Now onto the next one.
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Amy