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Wow! Goku as Seme? Now that was one thing I did not expect. Yet it was perfect and I could not see it any other way after reading the whole chapter. Your descriptions were beautifully vivid and the love scene was true to character. Goku is a sly little baka isn\'t he? Bravo on a very satisfying ending. I have one question.... More? Please? (begging pathetically like Goku after missing breakfast) Incredible job dear!
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Amy

Beautiful. Stunning. A wonderful story. I applaud your creative talent and hope to see more of your work.
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Eddie

Awwww! So kawaii!!! =] I like your DokugakujixKougajii. They don’t have enough shippers... Your language is beautiful, but that last sex scene was a little clichéd with the language. Of course, I could just feel that way because it was GokuxSanzo, and that’s a pairing I don’t really buy. Anyway, a nice little story. Please share more with us! =]

This was awesome. Love this version of the ending. Like the other reviewer said, I wouldn\'t be surprised if this how it does end. I\'m reading this mostly for the DokuxKou pairing since I don\'t see it anywhere! and you\'re doing a stupendous job with it! I hope the next chapter is coming soon.

Ooooh... Your characterization is a bit off, to my taste, but you plot is most promising. What happens?!?! I\'m intrigued. More? =]

Hi, I really love this fic! 58 and 39 are my fav pairings and you write so well!!! I love the way you set up Gojyo and Hakkai, so sweet!!! Love the imagery and character descriptions, they\'re incredibly vivid. So anyway love your work and cant wait for the next chapter :) Oh and apologies for any dire spelling!
Lil

Nice! You wrapped up events, set up character relationships nicely. And now, boom! action. I really like the story so far. Write more soon :)

Excellent work! This was superbly well written -- no -- crafted. This piece was technically sound, the characterizations were on point and the pace was wonderful.

I believe this is the most plausible “end game” scenario I have read or pondered. I would not be surprised if ,minus the lemons, your words find themselves upon my television.

I felt the pairings came about in a most natural way and I appreciate the way you kept the injuries in mind during the more “juicy” moments. Hurt and comfort themed stories are so much fun that the tendency is to forget the practicality of it all. Good work.

One point of critique, I’m not sure if this was spacing done intentionally or if when you converted to HTML the program messed with your spacing, but there were a few times it took a little bit to identify the speaker of a sentence or the object of a “he”. The problem was easily solved by re-reading a sentence or two. I just felt I should point it out. It seemed rather random, so I suspect it was something in the HTML conversion. That can do strange things to a document and some of them cannot be corrected.

Again, excellent work. I really like what you have laid out and established. I greatly appreciate the emphasis on Kou, he is often forgotten in fan fiction. I know I’m rather guilty of it.

Thank you for your time and effort. Thank you for sharing and I am looking forward to your next installment.

Cupnjava c[~]~~~*sip*

Oh what a wonderful beginning. You have a thorough grasp on the characters and even have all my favorite pairings. It was well written and had me riveted to the screen. I cannot wait to read more! It is delightful!
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Amy