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March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i am happy that you set that you wher going to stick with this fic oh can
you tell me how does Akuma look i am haveing a hard time picturing him
oh u have to go bye bye with love zafiro
PS: up-dated soon
i am happy that you set that you wher going to stick with this fic oh can
you tell me how does Akuma look i am haveing a hard time picturing him
oh u have to go bye bye with love zafiro
PS: up-dated soon
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March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great as always, Kohaku-chan. Can\'t wait for the next chapter. It\'s so very rude of you to make me wait to read it like veryone else! *Tear*
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March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story! But it\'s weird to name the guy Akuma. I guess it fits, but it\'s kinda funny. ^ ^;
Keep it up!!
Keep it up!!
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked. the conversation between Eiri and Mika was very in character :-)
Wow that Akuma guy\'s twisted. How did Shuichi get involved with him in the first place?
Wow that Akuma guy\'s twisted. How did Shuichi get involved with him in the first place?
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It continues to get better and better Kohaku-chan and that is NOT because I\'m your sister! Hurry and post the next damn chapter! Suspense and cliff hangers are very, very, very, very, very mean! Did I mention that it\'s mean to leave us hanging like that?
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Ch. 1-2) Nice idea, horrible formating.
You need a beta and some spell-check ASAP. I\'m serious.
I hope you work on the next chapters a little deeper. This idea is worth more than two-bit writing.
You need a beta and some spell-check ASAP. I\'m serious.
I hope you work on the next chapters a little deeper. This idea is worth more than two-bit writing.
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March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Shu-chan! He shouldn\'t let this guy Akuma hurt him like that, when\'s he going to leave him? I like the story so far, but I don\'t like the fact he\'s being hurt so much, well anyway update soon!!!
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March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Honoo here again. Honoo wants more Shuichi and Yuki mettingssss! Next chapter come out soon for Honoo? I reallllyyy love the story still but I woullld like more Yuki Shichi meettings!
Honoo Out!
Honoo Out!
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March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i love this fic is the best i hope you up-dated soon
and make more Chapters please
PS: please don\'t be like some Author\'s that do a fic and they don\'t finish it
i have to go wirh love zafiro
i love this fic is the best i hope you up-dated soon
and make more Chapters please
PS: please don\'t be like some Author\'s that do a fic and they don\'t finish it
i have to go wirh love zafiro
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HI!!!!
i just want to say that i love your fic and that i hope you up-dated soon oh and don\'t be like some
Authors that start a fic and don\'t finish well i have to go with love zafior
i just want to say that i love your fic and that i hope you up-dated soon oh and don\'t be like some
Authors that start a fic and don\'t finish well i have to go with love zafior