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This was an excellent beginning! You must write more! I am very curious as to who all is going to be included in the story. What do they want? Why are they so set on getting the main character? Why,if Jessica's sharing a room w/ her sister, doesn't Roxxane know who/what any of these people are? The first chapter was very well done and I anxiously await the posting of any and all future chapters. -Aishu_noh_Hotaru

That was very good. Do not stop writing this, you have to write more. Please keep going!

What an intriguing idea! I\'d be interested to learn what the boys want with poor Jessica and her sister Roxanne. Besides just being their women...Why these women? Is there something special about them? Is Sesshoumaru going to keep Jessica? ...Thinking about it makes me realize, there aren\'t that many bishounen in the world compared to the number of women at one time...So are they going to be put in some kind of harem? Ugh....That would suck. I\'d want Sesshy/Kouga all for my own!!!