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for Grace of a Swan

by MyntTee

person Akela
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nyah!! so fast and confusing!! agh!! cant keep up!! *grasps spinning head*
wow, this story keeps the mind reeling, the plot goes at an incredibly fast pace!!
anyhoo, keep it up, this could be fun!! *releases head, which resumes spinning*
eugh....gettin dizzy....
person Anon
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol nice, ninja turtles
i hate the dubbed its gay =_=
but add more darkxkrad in it please XD
person Kupo_Wrath
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yet another awesome chapter! I don\'t know if I can take the suspense anymore! ... Wait... what suspense.... >.>... Anyway... I love this story, more and more every single time!! If you don\'t continue, I shall stalk you, and your children! Bwhahahaha!!!!! No but seriously... Keep it coming or suffer my... manic depression!!! >.> *sobs* ... *then randomly gets happy again and re-reads the story* YOU MAKE MY DAY! Update soon ^^
person fire and napalm
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sooooooooooo cool. please keep writing, i\'ve saved this to favourites. I await your update, impatiently. for constructive critiscism, some words are used inaccurately, for your use, so a little reading over might help. I can read it fine, but it would improve it. for your discretion and use. I\'ll check back, cause I love it period.
Sugar Thunder
person Kupo_Wrath
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOO! awesome! I LOVE this.. please continue!! *clings and begs with puppy eyes* pweeeaaaassssseeee ... *is dying of in-love-with-ness* ^^
person Mergic and Tor
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
M: WRITE MORE OR I WILL HURT YOU.
I liked everything M-rated about this fic, I disliked... well, nothing.
Hm.. what did I mortally hate? Well, let me think... Nope! Nothing comes to mind... Oh wait! I hate... I HATE THE FACT THAT YOU DIDN\'T DESCRIBE SATOSHI\'S LEFT FOOT! WHAT WERE YOU THINKING?! IT\'S A VERY IMPORTANT FOOT!
Tor: Why don\'t you just say there was nothing you mortally hated, or remotely hated? Why bother wearing out the capslock key?
M: ... Well, anyway, I really like this fic, Please update.
-M and T
person anonymoose
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD satoshixkradxdarkxdaisukeness :D:D:D love it XD satoshi does himself whoa XD
update! it took you too long to update!
person Nia
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy...hell...I\'m like...turned on... that was HOT! KEEP \'EM COMING! PLEASE!
person M-Chan
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
excellent. i demand more.
person sara
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoo! that was great! when are daisuke and satoshi gonna have sex?

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