rate_review Reviews

Good story. It's hard to find Shinrei x Yuya stories.^^

I love this story, Aly. I read the censored version on FF.net and I read this a while agao, but thought I should put a review up. What is there not to love about this? It flows nicely. It's so incredibly detailed and descriptive. Got to be one of the best lemons I've read in a long time. I could only say: Gimme more. Heheh.

Great fic. I hope that you\'ll write more NC-17 and R rated fics.

Nicely done. An interesting look at Shinrei\'s side of things after the \'Kiss of Death\' incident. Especially enjoyed the bits with the blanket and ensuing \'warm\' activities. *evil cackle* Keep up the good work!

I loved this! XD

Alt. pairing aside, it was really hot - I\'m still fanning myself - and very well written too. Though I\'ve only seen the anime and haven\'t gotten to volume 12 of the manga yet (scrounging up the money) I\'ve no doubt that you managed to toggle it well into the acutal storyline.

*blissful sigh* So happy now...

you left out her scar.

ALY ALY ALY...WOW. *fans herself* that may have been one of the hottest things i\'ve read in a long time.. the attention to detail is incredible, you can almost feel Shinrei kissing you when you read!!! and even though I may be biased, slightly obsessed and lusting over my water baby, it was still one of the best lemons i\'ve ever come across. that says alot from a yaoi fangirl. Bravo and write me another!

as far as critiques go, i really dont have much to say.. it was wowwy wow wow, I can kinda see what you mean by it happens suddenly, if it was real SDK life you know yuya\'d put up a bit more of a fight.. the fact that its a dream, and that dreams are random and things dont happen on the same time/reaction frames, really makes it interesting... cuz really... how many dirty dreams have you had where theres a realistic progression? Every sex dream I\'ve ever had or heard about is kinda wham bam. Especially the ones about people you dont expect.. den er det beste !!!

I loved this story! The lemon was wonderful, & the entire story was well-written. The physical aspect of Yuya that\'s missing is the scar from her brother\'s killer, yes? o.O Anyways, I just want to say that your lemon is better than anything I have ever written, & I do so hope to be able to write that well someday. Until that day, though, I can only dream.. >.< Please keep writing! I beg of you! ::puppy dog eyes:: Please?? O.O

~Ookami-chan~ *^..^*

OMG! This was just wonderful! Your writing style is fantastic! This is the Best Samurai Deeper Kyo lemon I have EVER read! **I\'ve told all of my friends to read it too!!!** I can only say that I look forward to reading more of your fics! I\'m so impressed! YAY!!!