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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. At first, I read the whole \"Haruka/Zoicite\" sinario and was all \"But it\'d never work out\" and logical. But the story was really great. Beautifully written.
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
CHAP 2, NOT bad, overall it was(the writing and storyline) better then chapter one. Good job!
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAhhh that was perfect! Great job. I am glad that you decided to finish it. Keep up the great work! I will expect many more wonderful things from you. :)
~Moon-Daisuke
~Moon-Daisuke
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March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute story ^^ A most original pairing, and kinda WAFFy. Great job!
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March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty darn good!, very different and interesting. Will read other three chaps later.
Though I think you should revise the 1st part, it\'s both of their first times with the opposite sex need more clear detail and feelings expressed(my opinion)
Anyway Amara is one of my Fav charaters! so I look forward to reading more
Though I think you should revise the 1st part, it\'s both of their first times with the opposite sex need more clear detail and feelings expressed(my opinion)
Anyway Amara is one of my Fav charaters! so I look forward to reading more
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I enjoyed it very much. Keep up the good work and I will patiently await further chapters. :)
~Moon-Daisuke
~Moon-Daisuke