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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have definitely got me curious, and interested in the reasons behind Kaoru's conflicted behavior, etc. I hope you are planning some updates soon?
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm happy to have stumbled upon this fic. Each chapter sucked me in a bit further. Now I'm dying to read more! Very nice!!!
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dang. When you update, you update ALL your stories! ^,^ Kudos for that! Aneewho, I really like this story! The Sano/Megumi thing is very funny. Also very funny when Sano tries to throw the bookshelf at Kenshin. I also like the part where she tells Saito not to smoke and Kenshin ends up swiping the death-stick from him and chucking it out the window. But I have to wonder, why did he take Kaoru's sword? I do like the POVs as well. Makes it more personal. I'm also wondering, do the first two chapters mean that they have an intimate relationship? Well, keep writing! I'm waiting eagerly for another chapter!
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very promising fic. Please do continue.
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool! i was dying to know who it was hahahahaha see ya in the next chapter oh ya you uploaded the first chapter twice well later!
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ah, so its going back to when they met. mm, good chapter, but kaoru seems a little off. she\'s accepting kenshin too quickly. otherwise, good job.
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March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know! I know! Is it... Misao and Aoshi? Or wait! Maybe it\'s Misao and Saitoh? Update soon please!
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March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i\'m guessing k/k? yah? cuz no man can say \'beautiful\' like his looks. i\'m looking forward to it! update soon!
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I was expecting K/K. Since there are so many here I think I\'ll be sick T.T. I\'m joking, but there ARE other couples besides the terribly cliched K/K and A/M. No offence meant, that\'s just my say.
I loke the way this is going so far, I could picture it almost perfectly in my mind. Now if you will say who they are, that would make it near perfect. I\'ve only noticed a few tidbits here and there, like \"thru\" should be spelled \"through\". Netspeak adds a terrrible thing to a story, so try not to use it if you can. And a few sentences or words about the scenery would add some great details too. Putting scenery in adds more depth and helpd the reader visualize things better.
I\'m actually crossing my fingers in hopes of it being Sou/Mi. T.T........I can hope can\'t I? waiting eagerly for the next chapter!
I loke the way this is going so far, I could picture it almost perfectly in my mind. Now if you will say who they are, that would make it near perfect. I\'ve only noticed a few tidbits here and there, like \"thru\" should be spelled \"through\". Netspeak adds a terrrible thing to a story, so try not to use it if you can. And a few sentences or words about the scenery would add some great details too. Putting scenery in adds more depth and helpd the reader visualize things better.
I\'m actually crossing my fingers in hopes of it being Sou/Mi. T.T........I can hope can\'t I? waiting eagerly for the next chapter!