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February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DAMN!!!!!!!!!!!!! You have talents. I love these chapters so much! :) Can't wait to read your next one. She is luck. Hiko is one hot 43 year old. You should write chapter where she comes vist him in his house.
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*broken brain* Hiko sexy...
*coughs* Anyway, i loved the whole thing... if you choose to continue it i'm sooooo for it but if not what's here is just fine :D Well done and I mean it! ^^
*coughs* Anyway, i loved the whole thing... if you choose to continue it i'm sooooo for it but if not what's here is just fine :D Well done and I mean it! ^^
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow i absolutley love this ya know theres not enough hiko stories out there i realy hope this continues and i wonder if there will be a plot i hope i cant wait for your next update
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh... I love this naughty story. You should have so many more reviews on it.
So, so many more.
It\'s beautiful... utterly, and completely beautiful.
Tsuki-san
So, so many more.
It\'s beautiful... utterly, and completely beautiful.
Tsuki-san
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! what happened? kindly please update this one?
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your imagination is a very, very naughty one! This is so good! Keep it up!
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is turning into a wonderful love story. I hope you continue it. The last two chapters of \'Control\' were good as well. You are blossoming into a beautiful erotica author. Keep up the good work. You can only get better from here.
Tuski-san
p.s. Thank you for what you said in my reviews. It means more than you can imagine. god bless my friend.
Tuski-san
p.s. Thank you for what you said in my reviews. It means more than you can imagine. god bless my friend.
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April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed? most asuredly. You must finish and then continue.
Tsuki-san
Tsuki-san
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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is good! It reminds me of some of my fave historical novels. I like it so much! Please continue this one.
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was........yummy! I didn\'t know you wrote. Shows how long it\'s been since
I viewed the lists. Must read more of this woman\'s
work. And you... you must write another chapter to this ... ahem... one shot.
One word of advice... sentence variation: Your first paragraph ended with 4
sentences, all beginning with \'ing words, and then the next paragraph began
with one. Only someone who is used to critiquing manuscripts would really
notice, and I am a member of two professional writting groups... hence, I noticed.
:P A few other extraneous words and double word useage (just proof read a
little more), nothing major. The piece was Exemplary.
Well Done... I\'ll be watching you, young one. I think this needs to go on my
websight. That I do.... :)
Tsuki-san
Off to find something else of yours.....
I viewed the lists.
work. And you... you must write another chapter to this ... ahem... one shot.
One word of advice... sentence variation: Your first paragraph ended with 4
sentences, all beginning with \'ing words, and then the next paragraph began
with one. Only someone who is used to critiquing manuscripts would really
notice, and I am a member of two professional writting groups... hence, I noticed.
:P A few other extraneous words and double word useage (just proof read a
little more), nothing major. The piece was Exemplary.
Well Done... I\'ll be watching you, young one. I think this needs to go on my
websight. That I do.... :)
Tsuki-san
Off to find something else of yours.....