rate_review Reviews

This is a cool story. Very original; I like that. One of the very few that I've taken time to read on adultff.net, so please continue. The only thing I should mention is that you really need a proof reader. Keep writing!

Phantasm

thankyou for updating i read both this and your gta nerima fic and love your writing keep it up

Nice to see that the story is up and continuing. Been waiting for a while, but GTA: Nerima helped to fill in some reading time. hehehe

We have taken this story off of our favorites lists and stoped reading it.
..........from the bottom of our hearts "FUCK YOU!!!".

Succubbi are female INCCUBBI are male, Kuno still thinks Ranma is a guy.

So......Is Ranma doing weight training or what(I'm talking about the stuff in his clothes, not her breasts).

a really great story, looking forward to the next chapter.

No problem at all. I wish that others took things as well as you do. I try to give a review in a constructive manner most of the time, but alas I am only human. Typos happen, formatting errors while posting happens, and plain bad luck when proofreading happens. Big deal. I like your work, and hope to see more of this story, and your GTA: Nerima plotline real soon.

A few days ago I reviewed an Inu Yasha fic, and said the fic really needed a beta. The review was deleted. The grammar and spelling were both bad, and seemed like a gradeschooler wrote it. The Inu reveiw was honest if a bit harsh, but I do not regret it if it helps an author to grow.

Cool deal! Been waiting for ch 21 for a while now. Nice to see the story isn\'t abandoned.

A few spelling errors to point out though. The usual misspelling of Saotome with \'Soatome\', and sole with \'soul\'. A couple of other minor ones, but these are the 2 consistant misspells. Other than those, the plotting is good, and the feel is great.

Thanks for pointing out the misspells for me. I write most of my stuff in a Word document with an auto spell check and so that Saotome doesn\'t keep popping up as an error, I input it into my dictionary, but I sometimes I\'ll put in the wrong word or the first version of it that comes up. Basically anything close to it\'ll automatically be changed into the \'right\' word as I type, so most of the time I don\'t notice my errors. So again thanks for pointing that out for me and I\'ll always appreciate anyone helping me out. Thanks for reading the fic, and it\'s never going to be abandoned, it\'s just that I wrote 20 chapters in a month and decided to take a break and try something else for while as I thought up new ideas. Anyways keep an eye open and for the love of god, have fun and party hard.