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i loved your story and i hope you write more i would love to read them

Great chapter!!! I can\'t believe it\'s finally over, you have to write more! YOU HAVE TO WRITE A SEQUEL PLEASE!!!!! THIS STORY IS THE BEST! Or at least some one-shots on the twins! Well hope to read more from ya soon!!!!

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watermelon, hahahahahah!
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bunny food, hahahahahahahahaha!!
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Oh! what did the second baby look like?

Aaawww - that was so sweet. I like the babies\' names. And that sneaky Eiri - wants more babies, eh? Hmmmm. Better watch out, Shuichi. Nice wrap-up for this story. An excellent first story. Looking forward to many more. :)

OMG!! xDDDDD I loved it. It\'s amazing. Ahhhh! I can\'t believe it\'s over....>>; or is it? Anyways, I can dream can I x3 Wonderful work. I\'ll be telling millions of people to read your amazing stories till the day I die. Wonderful work. -reads the whole story- =3

honestly, this is one of the most beautiful fanfiction that i\'ve read for a long time... if you\'d ask me, this would be a really nice follow-up series after the OAV thing. -smiles- if it\'s possible to contact Maki Murakami and you\'ll hand him over the storyline or something.. the slight OOC-ness of some characters especially Yuki did not bother me at all, (which surprised me) and i loved the idea that the both of them were able to make it through all the crazy stuffs that they\'ve experienced with the stalker haha.. nice one... Shu getting pregnant was a bit freaky but you\'ve made the story as a whole, practical, direct and down right good. a slap to the face who hates yaoi... plus the realization and the actions of yuki that he really loves shuichi in ur fic.. which was not that visible in the TV series and OAV. Makes me want to fall in love again.. domo arigato... -grins- hope you can write another fanfic which is equally inspiring and lemony? like this one... ja ne!

I wanted to wait with this review till the last chapter but I just can\'t. Your story is the best gravi fic I\'ve ever read. It\'s just brilliant. The plot is interesting and what I like the most is the fact that even if you write about something freaky it still seems to be real. You also try to make every detail perfect. Unfortunatelly not many authors do that. Some people are right that is like a new series. I hope there will be a sequel or maybe just a one shot. E-mail me someday, please.

Hmm.. maybe 1 or 2 one shots as you said would be ok....but a full sequal to this...nah even i cant see that....its good as is....i say dont even try to write a sequel where one is not needed! This is a beautifull piece of work.....^^ cant wait for the grand fin.

Ah, like a good cup of coffee, that was a nice finish to my day. Can you tell I\'m from Seattle? I\'m looking forward to your epilogue, but certainly understand your need for closure on a story. I hope you\'ve got more ideas for Gravi plots; you write them very well and I enjoy reading them very much. See ya on \"I Want Us to Be a Family.\"

I\'m so sad its ending!! TT-TT I knew he was going to have twin boys! ^_^ I love it!! I cant wait for the epilouge and please maybe please a sequel...? TT-TT my sister is laughing at me....