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for This I promise You

by Chocho

person Raven
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
first I\'d like to say I love the story, love the idea, and that it\'s got a plot that could easily have fit into the story line and that your not screwing up the characters. Major props on managing to accomplish all three not many can do it. But Now I\'m a little confused. Shuiichi has a Genetic Mutations that\'s allowing him to be pregnant??? I thought he had a surgery. I\'m confused.
person inumoon3
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter!!! I hope you update soon, okay!!! Update soon and I hope Shu does have twins!!!!
person Shadowfox13
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, does this mean Shu might have twins or triplett or quartuplettes? *laughing with evil glee*
person wendyghost
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was a sweet chapter
person KitsuneFun
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It would be sooo Great for them to have twins one could have Eiri\'s features with Shuichi\'s coloring and the other could look like Shuichi but, with Eiri\'s coloring and they could both be boys. that would be really cute!;)
person Anon
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ths is by far my fav gravitation fic i have read i love it soo much im also very sorry i dont really do reviews but u just cant wait for more updates to this story please say their having twins omg i love the fic soo much
person Shari
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i am like so in love with this story.....and dammit shu better have twins....>.< hm well i guess is ok if he dosnt... anyway cant wait for the update... Heh enjoy classes...mine start early sept. 7more yrs of college crap for me....so i totally know the stress and time school takes....dont rush to update....but please dont forget to update at least occasionaly ^^
person Jaina Uesugi
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was amazing x3 Such talent thrown into your work. Like a banana and an apple =o Wonderful chapter. I\'ve been telling everyone I know to read your stories xD I can\'t wait to see if Shuichi really is having twins =o I hope so. -like, loves you- x3
person xunxin
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
contiue loving u huh?
yea rite dream on. lol.
well great chapter loved it of course
well duh y wouldn\'t i rite?
shu is gonna have twins shu is gonna have twins shu is gonna have twins!!!
hehehaha. cant wait til next chapter
damn school why does it have to come so soon
aahhhhhh!!!
person wendyghost
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey good chapter shu giving up bad luck really sad but if his going to have a baby hurry up and update soon before sat please its cause im out of town and unable to have computer only at the library and i leave that weekend and would love to read it before i go!

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