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The way Ash feels is just exactly how I feel. I hate the fact that when it's too late, all you can do is watch the one girl you love being taken by some other guy for in Ash's case, Tracey. I hate Orangeshipping, it's Pokeshipping's rival if you ask me but this fic is interesting to say the least. You said it has a slight twist right? I'd like to see a twisted Orangeshipping then. I'm not trying to say I hate it, I want to see how dark Orangeshipping can get, I read a dark Pokeshipping well, more like anti-Pokeshipping fic so why not an anti-Orangeshipping fic. Or you could make Ash go crazy. Did I mention I HATE Orangeshipping?

u bastard u better kill tracy in dis fic or ill kill u

UPDATE SOON!!!!

you need to finsh this story

Good Gracious,What a beggining.The plot is kinda looking good and i think Sonicfrank has to like this.Acctually love it.

Well, I gotta say I\'m satisfied. ^__^ Just keep those chapters comin\'. XD

~S.F.

That\'s actually the sweetest thing I\'ve ever read! Keep it up!

I\'m so late in doing this but here goes...This story is a bit twisted, but original. I\'ve never read a fanfic that has Ash telling the tale from a closet of Misty and Tracey getting it on. To tell the truth I don\'t like Misty/Tracey pairings, but you\'ll make it good anyway won\'t you?

~Akewataru~

P.S. I know I haven\'t answered your wonderful e-mail as of yet, I really feel bad that I haven\'t, but I will this weekend I promise!

i found that really good cool !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!