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Well, I liked this one too. Rather refreshing to see at least someone doesn't write about Vash like he has nothing in that broom-head of his except for doughnuts, and the idea of 'love and piece'.
Very well written, not much to add.
Thanks,
Ithil

Reviewed your other two, might as well do this one too. I love your characterization of Vash, because it irks me when people write him as non-serious internally. He\'s a smart man. He\'s also introspective, and angst-filled, and wise, just like you\'ve pegged him. Very gratifying.

Angst with a subplot of love is my favorite, and I will love you forever if you write one of these where it\'s not one sided and the feelings come out in the open. Leave it open-ended (I read this as \"happy\") and I\'ll love you more.

Though it doesn\'t seem like your thing.

hey this is awesome! I havn\'t heard the song but some of the lyrics fit so well wit what you\'ve written...i really liked it!

Well done and keep up the good work! *grin*
Hellagoddess

Excellent, excellent writing! Unlikely situation, perhaps, but very well done. Please write more!