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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh..This story has the same problem as 60 percent of the other stories on this site; IT'S NOT FINISHED!!! What's the point of having a decent plot lined up if you're not going to fucking finish the story. Naru is semi-incharacter, afterall, she does say in the manga that Keitaro was hot so you have a good start but please finish this story and don't just forget about it like some of these other idiots on the site. They let their fics lay dormant for over a year even when they have reviews full of people begging them to finish the story. Do the smart thing man!!!!
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story needs to be continued, and some double checking of punctuation. It\'s got me intrigued.
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Getting the next chapter in right about now would be good. I can\'t wait to see what Naru will do to him! So please hurry up now!
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my, naru is gonna rape keitaro while he\'s sleeping hehe
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good so far, keep it up
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i mean come it is to short you need to make it longer or it will be boring and you havn\'t even go to the good stuff and
ps: get the next chapter going
ps: get the next chapter going
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how long do they stay and how far do they go