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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Short, to the point... Interesting, good writing... But where\'s the plot? Make it longer, I think it was too easy for Rei to open quickly. Usually situations shapes Rei towards liking to hating someone - like with Shinji for example.
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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GIVE IT A LEMON PLEASE ALSO GOOD PLOT
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was just lovely...short but sweet! ^_^ Good job!
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting to say the least.
It was well written but Asuka, and Rei to a greater extent, were out of character. Don\'t take it the wrong way though. ^_^; I\'m just saying I wish I could know exactly what promted Asuka and Rei to come together despite the feelings they have for each other. With Asuka\'s intense dislike and Rei\'s indifference, it\'s hard to picture the two of them even speaking on friendly terms much less kissing and what have you.
While the story was a bit too short for my liking, it wasn\'t hard to read given your writing style. I just wished you provided more insight into their characters. I guess the only way I can explain it is that I felt like I was reading the last chapter of a story instead of the first. Still, it was a good effort. ^_^
It was well written but Asuka, and Rei to a greater extent, were out of character. Don\'t take it the wrong way though. ^_^; I\'m just saying I wish I could know exactly what promted Asuka and Rei to come together despite the feelings they have for each other. With Asuka\'s intense dislike and Rei\'s indifference, it\'s hard to picture the two of them even speaking on friendly terms much less kissing and what have you.
While the story was a bit too short for my liking, it wasn\'t hard to read given your writing style. I just wished you provided more insight into their characters. I guess the only way I can explain it is that I felt like I was reading the last chapter of a story instead of the first. Still, it was a good effort. ^_^