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March 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was really hot. Also, what is this secret that Sora has? Is it some sort of mental issue or what? I really can't wait to read chapter 10. Really well done. :)
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March 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Also, I vote for Tai and Sora for a pairing. Matt and Mimi are better off together anyway.
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April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
not really sure how these kinds of reviews are supposed to go, but here goes.
... Matt has no idea what he's doing, does he? Surprised everyone can't tell.
... Matt has no idea what he's doing, does he? Surprised everyone can't tell.
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November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MOST AMAZING STORY I'VE RED!!!!! EMAIL ME WHEN YOU GOT THE NEXT CHAPTERS!!!!
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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter One: I figured there's no such thing as too many reviews, so I'll just say the same things I said on ff.net.
Thanks for reviewing my story. I feel like a heel because I've been following this story ever since you posted it, but I've never reviewed. Well, here goes...I'm going to review every chapter! Since this is the first chapter, I'm going to say that I HOPE this ends up as Taiora and Mimato! Sorato's typical and boring. And that's the type of couple they make in the show. Typical. And. Boring.
Thanks for reviewing my story. I feel like a heel because I've been following this story ever since you posted it, but I've never reviewed. Well, here goes...I'm going to review every chapter! Since this is the first chapter, I'm going to say that I HOPE this ends up as Taiora and Mimato! Sorato's typical and boring. And that's the type of couple they make in the show. Typical. And. Boring.
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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Two: "She was a fool, but she was his fool, and he'd have to live with that mistake for the rest of his life."
Damn right it's a mistake! The mistake was they shouldn't have been married in the first place! Just like the freaking series!
But on a happy note, the bit of Taiora was nice.
Damn right it's a mistake! The mistake was they shouldn't have been married in the first place! Just like the freaking series!
But on a happy note, the bit of Taiora was nice.
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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Three: Ahh...the drama! I WUV IT! And what a great way to start the chapter off with a little bit of Mimato lime! I can say that Sora's really dedicated to her man. If that was ME, ain't-no-way-in-hell...
And I felt kinda bad for Tai. Maybe it's because I'm also a Michi fan, (yeah, I'm a hypocrite) or maybe it's because he's my fave male character! He doesn't deserve this!
And I felt kinda bad for Tai. Maybe it's because I'm also a Michi fan, (yeah, I'm a hypocrite) or maybe it's because he's my fave male character! He doesn't deserve this!
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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Four: (screw everything that just happened in the beginning, and middle of the chapter)
(clears throat and screams) MIMI!
(clears throat and screams) MIMI!
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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Five: I swear Sora confuses me in this story. She knows that her husband is cheating yet she still continues to stick by his side. It's obvious that Tai has feelings for her, but she continues to...well...I feel pretty bad for Tai.
And to be 28 and a virgin... OUCH! THAT'S gotta hurt!
And to be 28 and a virgin... OUCH! THAT'S gotta hurt!
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January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah I love it!! Such a good story and I love the Tai and Sora pairing. They're always come across as soooo cute to me!! I can't wait to read the next chapters!!!