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for In the Steel Gray Morning

by kimonomaker

person Anon
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL, fantastic! Your grammar, descriptive details, your style, they're all wonderful!
person chibirin8
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg I like that last line that you put in I thik tha treally made it ten times better not that the rest of the oneshot was bad I like it but I really like how you put that in the end almost trying so brake the mood but at the same time get him back in.
person wired
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well...not really into this apiring...why not write a different yet fluffy pairing...say okitaxtetsu?errrrr i like the pairng but it seems that the fanfics here are not doing this pairing...what interested me in this pairing is that they are total opposites.....well i know souji\'s older......but its like tetsu is fire.....fiery personality....loud.......tough yet it seems to clash okita\'s calm..........funny bordering to childlike personality....its kind of a cute pairing since they seem to have similar circumstances....young and trust into the \'wolves of mibu\' grasp....so i\'d like to ask a request........can u write a story bout this pairing?i like ur work coz\' its like looking at it directly..eheheheh anyway thank u for your tym!!!!!!!! XD
person Luna
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that has been the best story of those 2 I\'ve ever read. Can you do another one where its right after Okita stole Hiji-san haiku book and Hiji-san punishies Okita? Have you ever seen Samurai Deeper Kyo? If u have can you plz do one of SaizoxYukimura, yes in that order like a lil sexy one were the finally confess thier feelings and fuck. Plz and thank you keep up the good work.
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice description and it was enjoyable to read. Although they were a little OOC
person Swirly
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yummy! ;)
person Mirror
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! *jumps and screeches with utter delight* I love this pairing and you captured them so well. I hope to see another one from you soon. Souji is a yummy yummy thing!
person Liz
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoo *fans self* that was hot ^_^ Dude, I was just excited to see that there was a new fanfic in the PMK section! *jumps up and down* Squee! It helps that Hijikata and Souji are my favorite pairing for PMK. I hope you write some more soon, because this was just awesome. Keep up the great work.
person Ri
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I truly loved it! *Applause* Great job! ^________^

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