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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the chapter... It did quench my thirst... I \'ve been checking the progress every week... thanks for the update... here\'s a kiss to your hard work...
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey will please let enishi save soujiro already it has already been to long and torture is too much. plz update soon. it is interest but i think its enough abuse on soujiro.
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm...i don\'t think it\'s too much abuse. kinda like the same with the series... it\'s AU after all! write more!!! write more!!! i love it... please don\'t take TOO long.
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the story! I couldn\'t stop reading it! ^__^ Keep working on it! I can\'t wait to read more.
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love ur story.. u r really smart 2 make 1 bout soujirou\'s past.. particularly coz he have a tragis past n every1 want 2 not more bout it rather than his future coz a lot of ppl did tat n most of those fics is are really boooooriiiing.....(most probably coz the authors r soujirou\'s fans n can\'t stand 2 make out a story with him suffering...)this is sumthing new n great 2 read!! but .. if u don mind.. i hope tat u won make soujirou 2 b so uke... he seems 2 b crying everytime!!! i noe tat he is still a child in this fic.. but... when snippet of his past is revealed in the anime... he seems 2 b a tough kid.. he only cried once when he killed his \'lovely\' relatives n put his smile mask on everytime including when he was nearly killed by shishio n beaten. i hope tat u will b able 2 improve on tat area coz u really do have a great story but the soujirou being very OOC just troubles me... GANBATTE!!! :p
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been reading for a while, but am only now Reviewing ^^;
Sorry.
Poor Sou-chan... But yay Enishi!
Ummm... I don\'t really know what to say other than that I enjoy your story and hope that you keep writing it. I don\'t find many stories with Sou-chan in them..
-Shin-chan
Sorry.
Poor Sou-chan... But yay Enishi!
Ummm... I don\'t really know what to say other than that I enjoy your story and hope that you keep writing it. I don\'t find many stories with Sou-chan in them..
-Shin-chan
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh. Neat plot twist. I definently love this fic, you\'re really good with descriptions, plot, etc. etc.
Good luck with college!
Oh yes...
THANKYOUSOMUCHFORUPDATINGITSSUCHAGREATSTORYYAYYAYYAY!
Luff,
Serenity
Good luck with college!
Oh yes...
THANKYOUSOMUCHFORUPDATINGITSSUCHAGREATSTORYYAYYAYYAY!
Luff,
Serenity
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September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this chapter\'s a bit short but it\'s a good progress... by the way, can u refresh my memory of who this enishi guy is... sorry!!! i seem to have forgotten who he is... hmm... pls dun flame me...
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September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi! misanagi here!
thanks for your reviews. yeah, it seems like my chapters are shorter than what I intended them to be. my next chapter will be twice as long (if all goes well) and will post it before i start hibernating from the fanfic world for my finals. i hope you\'re not too shocked with soujiro\'s saviour.
amethyst: yukishiro enishi is the younger brother of yukishiro tomoe, kenshin\'s first wife in the prelude OAV (before the actual series). he appears towards the end of the series in the Jinchuu(Revenge) Arc. He looks like mido ban in getbackers, with the silver/grey eyes and chinese clothing. ^__^
cheers!
thanks for your reviews. yeah, it seems like my chapters are shorter than what I intended them to be. my next chapter will be twice as long (if all goes well) and will post it before i start hibernating from the fanfic world for my finals. i hope you\'re not too shocked with soujiro\'s saviour.
amethyst: yukishiro enishi is the younger brother of yukishiro tomoe, kenshin\'s first wife in the prelude OAV (before the actual series). he appears towards the end of the series in the Jinchuu(Revenge) Arc. He looks like mido ban in getbackers, with the silver/grey eyes and chinese clothing. ^__^
cheers!
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. And it\'s original. I\'ve read ones where sure Sou is abused but never ever ever one with SOujiro and Enishi!! Please update soooon!!!!!!