rate_review Reviews

GREAT STORY!! SHORT & TO THE POINT!!

Oh, yes, very nicely done. Makes perfect sense! And I wondered if Minako had just goofed up like usual, or had deliberately phrased it that way...hehhehheh (EG)

I\'m surprised that I\'ve read no other fanfic that dealt with Mamoru and Usagi missing Chibiusa before.. but it\'s short and very sweet, but reminds me more of the north american than japanese version, what with the \'meatball\' comments. I caught myself using \'Serena\' and \'Darien\' in place of \'Usagi\' and \'Mamoru\' because of how they acted towards each other. All in all, good work. :)