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August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Yoh may be sick, but this little one shot was fabulous :)
Keep up the good work!
Keep up the good work!
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this one. It is fairly well written for a dream fic. I can see a lot of potential with it.
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more more more I simply adore YohxHao and you know what I'm a crazy Hao fan, I mean hes perfect *drooling over Hao* be sure to update soon
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aRGh That was awseome, too bad it\'s one shot. SO hot, dirty and damn intrigiung! I like incest pairing ^^ good job for your fic, it\'s not only intriuging it good written . Keep up ^^
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehehehe... naughty Yoh... but oh so hot Yoh... hmm... maybe you should do a sequel where Hao comes through the window and asists Yoh....
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wai~ dead incest XDD finally, what looks liek a Yoh x Hao--instea dof Hao x Yoh...tho only ****. Loved the mixed emotion. very skilled :D
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was...hot! And very good...you should take the \'not good\' out of the summary...but then again, that\'s what made me want to look! ^_^ People who say that are always really good writers, just very..modest and shy! Lol...even I\'m that way, even though I don\'t have an account -.-
And I love this story! If there isn\'t already a sequel, you should make one...cause Hao could come back and Yoh wouldn\'t be \'sick\' anymore! Sorry, I\'d write more...but my stupid ass brother is playing his music really loudly, shaking my room (he\'s in the BASEMENT RIGHT below me!) so I\'m gonna go kick his ass...even though he\'s 4 years older than me...and is 150 pounds heavier O.o I love your story either way if you don\'t add a chapter or not! But I strongly suggest you make a whole new sequel! And this was just damn sexy!
And I love this story! If there isn\'t already a sequel, you should make one...cause Hao could come back and Yoh wouldn\'t be \'sick\' anymore! Sorry, I\'d write more...but my stupid ass brother is playing his music really loudly, shaking my room (he\'s in the BASEMENT RIGHT below me!) so I\'m gonna go kick his ass...even though he\'s 4 years older than me...and is 150 pounds heavier O.o I love your story either way if you don\'t add a chapter or not! But I strongly suggest you make a whole new sequel! And this was just damn sexy!
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:3 Nice! I good short piece ^__^
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was hott.....I\'m gonna go and take a cold shower now....good job man.
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *NNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEBBBBBBBBBBBBBLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD* I reallty really liked that, though it was short. still, that was waht made it so interesting. I really wish you would write more. I think you are a good writer and the more you writer, the better you will get and the happier I will be! Please, write more? I would be more than willing to write about ten reviews with each one longer than the last to get you to do so and sign a different name each time. ok, I lied, maybe 11. Yay! Either way, I like your work and would love to see more of it!
Best Luck!
Best Luck!