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for Sweet Little Lies

by aoi37

person 1012
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know what that thing about the violin was wrong.
Bull shit if you play any(violin viola voloncello) Right those feelings will come.
Thats why they have articulations!(i spelled it wrong.)
Those thing if done right will make Does not require thinking. Like i need to make it sad. Or happy or lively. That why they have Fortes, Pianos. Crescendo Dynamics. Virbrato.

person The~Wind
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was rather interesting. I read it all the way through, but found I didn\'t quite care for it. It was well written and very amusing. But, Haruka, pregnant? Her hair long? With a man? I guess that maybe it\'s my liking for the Haruka/Michiru pairing. But, I think you\'re a wonderful writer.
person ~Moon-Daisuke
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter. You handled Michiru really well. I like the fact that she made him wait 5 months. I hope you do do an epilogue/stand alone story to end this. I think that is a fantastic way to end everything so we know what happens from this point on. Keep up the fantastic work. :) I\'ll expect more great things from you.

~Moon-Daisuke

person animechick
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whats ging to happen to the baby????????????????
how about between Haruka and michiru???/
person ~Moon-Daisuke
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool. Keep up the great work. I will patiently wait for more. :)

~Moon-Daisuke
person ~Moon-Daisuke
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great work. I hope there is more to this story. I have enjoyed it so far. I will be patient and wait for an update. Keep up the fantastic work.

~Moon-Daisuke

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