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I love this! I hope you continue it someday!

Okayy. Well, I was just reading what you had written as the summary and you wrote almost everything incorrectly, it's not "Thank's" it's "thanks", because you wouldn't say: "thank is" would you? There are so many mistakes. And you don't say, "specially to those you reviewed my works", what does that mean anyway? When writing, everything needs to stay the same. When you're summarizing, about the story or not, you need to write correctly! It shows you're character, in ways. You don't seem to be the right age to be on this site.

wonderful chapter. whens the next coming out?

hope to read more of your work
update soon and keep up the goof work
kenshin and kaoru 4ever.
^-^x

i think this is really, really good i hope U continue on with the last 2 parts

Poor Kaoru..I would be scared to death!!! I hope Kenshin makes up for it!!! I cannnot wait til the next update!!!!

Wow, that was instence. Good job. You cruel person you. Leaving the readers hanging like that. Just kidding about the cruel thing. Hope you update soon. Until then, take care, and god bless.