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for Trick or Treat

by MBrown

person evean
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. I like SaitohxSano much more than SanoxKen so it\'s real treat for me. And your plot is quite captivating. Write more and soon, very soon. PLEASE!!!
person ayachan
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
w00t w00t, well, i hope that you will have fun at the convention then... but anyway... wow,.. this is GREAT!!! and i\'m sorry for you that aff seems to be giving you some trouble..... ohhh.. i think it would be AWESOME for Saitou to already know it was Sano, and just using this as an excuse to get close to Sano ^_^ that would be soo cute!!! please update asap, and keep up the good work~!
person PoisonAngel7
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My absolute favorite thing about chapter 5 was the line as Sano is thinking what kinds of things Saitou would be out doing like scaring kids and kicking animals. I think you\'ve captured an interesting aspect of the Saitou/Sano dynamic.

Instead of taking files from Word and puting them in notepad you could just save the word document as .html and post. At least that is what I do and it seems to work well.
person anubis
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this fic is sooooo much fun, honestly...I really hope that all those technological problems wont discourage you from updating *crosses fingers* am really looking forward to see what happens next. BTW how how did it go at boston anime?
person Shiko
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow I love this story ^.^ lol I remember when I first read it on ffn.net So glad your continuing it on here. Wow your going to Anime Boston too? Cool >.< I wish I could have the costume I wanted to wear done for it but I guess I\'ll have to wait till next year to wear it. ^.^\' oh well gives me plenty of time to make it perfect. Maybe I\'ll see you I bet the costumes came out great! Looking forward to the next chapter. Ja!
person PoisonAngel7
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You said this was your first fanfic, and honestly I feel like I can see your writing improving with each chapter. And it started in a pretty respectable place to begin with so you are on quite the roll. I don\'t know how believable it is that Sano makes such a convincing woman considering how built he is, but with a little suspension of belief I find this a really entertaining fic, and I hope you update again soon. :)
person ayachan
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg, this is just tooo cute! please update asap!
person Absolute--
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh....this is nice!!! (Heh, you do remember that Saito is married, yes? XD) I can also quite easily imagine Sano being \'pretty\'. I dunno...There\'s something about the way he\'s drawn that can be easily decerned as beauty. Get what I\'m saying? Anyway, this is pretty nice, and I hope you\'ll update sometime soon! I\'ll deffinatly read and review!
person Ryoko Kaysuya
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I comande you to write more of this wonderful and entertaing story!
Write i SAY!
person jasmine123
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahahahahahahha this is so so funny hehehe plz continue

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