rate_review Reviews

A very well-done story. I'll start off with my issues with it, and then my praise. Seems fair to me; get the stuff that hurts out of the way and end on a good note.

Fortunately, my issues are few and small. The formatting seemed a bit sketchy and off at times, and you had code at places where it was unfinished. It's a heck of a lot better than some stories, where the text is unreadable because there is code everywhere in it. However, this could simply be something you missed, or not being totally used to the code used here. It doesn't detract from the story at all, mostly a finesse issue if you will.

That's all I have for complaints, bravo!

What was good about the story was the pacing, the characterization and the slow build up to the revelation of what was happening to Schrodinger, along with your delicious meta use of the phrase "I don't know....."

The story was paced well, following the werecat's journey throughout the ship, noting the relationships between himself, the other 'werewolves', and each other. The characterization of each was well done, even if they didn't have any dialogue. The build up to the what the Major was doing and the Doc's role in it, plus Schrodinger's confused and silent pain, along with the Captain's action was superb. We feel for these characters and connect to them in ways we do not in the manga or OVA.

A well done piece and one that sticks with me. And in the end, that's what counts.

Very well done. The tale you told, while dark, was inspired. Good work.

Loved it! Amazing ending.

oh, wow. this is really good, kinda sad, but still good. Do you think you could add more chapters to it please????

so beautifully sad. i wanted to cry.

very well written. you made him feel very real.

.....that was great!!!!!!! omfg you must continue it!!!! i demand it

I loved it, but a nitpick.

Schrodinger is a werecat, not a werewolf. I know his ears aren\'t catlike, but eh. Hirano himself confirmed that he was a werecat at a convention. \'Werewolf\' is a rank, since both Schro and Rip were called \'werewolf\'. ^^

Sorry, my last comment was a little rushed, I was busy. I really did want to leave a real review. ;) I honestly do love stories about the nazis, since there are so few. I myself am a Schrodinger/Captain fan (I\'m writing a story for them, as a gift to someone), so ths story is quite well done. I like how everything is implication, the shonen-ai and the bond between them.

Kudos.

I\'ve been looking for something like this, with Millennium in it, for a long time now. And it was a REAALLY hard search. So of course it was twice more nicer when the result of my search was this damn well written. This was really touching, this beautiful little ficlet of yours. So it would be very very nice if you would write more fics like this... *hint hint* ^^;

That was pretty different!! I liked it alot. Especially the whole deal with going through people\'s rooms, it was very interresting! I also like the relationship that Schrodinger and the Captain had.. It was very sweet!! ^_^ ^_^