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for Concessions

by lawless

person Arya
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw. Megumi\'s sweet when she\'s vulnerable. Her usual strength makes the rare times when she lets us see her brief moments of insecurity stand out more.
person fox-san
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Too beautiful for any words of mine to even describe.
person Kireiko
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* sasuga wa, lawless-san!! Waiting with anticipation, this chapter did not disappoint!! but shame on you... another cliffhanger! ara, ara... well, as long as you keep updating, I\'ll keep waiting with bated breath ne? It is well worth the wait. Keep up the excellent work. Good job, awesome chapter as always... Don\'t worry about taking too long to update, you\'re busy, life happens, I understand. I\'d rather wait for a good quality chapter rather than something rushed. I appreciate all the effort and time you\'ve taken so far... *hug* (can\'t speak for everyone, but hopefully they agree... )

Always looking forward to upcoming chapters, and thanks for updating!

~Kir
person Lara
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love your story but you already know
person meg-chan
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful chapter, very vivid emotions
person Anon
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool, it has just about all my favorite characters and a good plot. There\'s far too much KK and AM pap in this place and not much else so keep writing!
person sanodevil
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
beautiful chapter, great written skills. I´m wanting for the good part
person SoUiChIrO
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey i like the whole story i just have hard time adding the words in your story to my computer database can you please review my story Ex\'Driver New Driver thank you
person Kireiko
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice, very nice, lawless-san!! Good chapter! I wouldn\'t worry about the length of the chapter, I myself was sad it ended when it did!! *grin*
Question though? I was confused about the hashish thing... until I read that Megumi had a pair too? Just pointing out (in stagevoice whisper of course *wink*) I believe that chopsticks are \"hashi\" in romanji... I think... Anyways, Lovely chapter! Can\'t wait to see what unfolds next!!
person Anubis
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
0_0! Well, I never expected Sano\'s love confession to be like that. I thought it had to be dragged and beaten from him but sine he\'s going nuts over Megumi already, it seems apt somehow that you wrote it this way. It doesn\'t change the fact that I\'m still a bit disgruntled about it, but its fading already as I write this review. The fact that the next chapter is going to be posted VERY SOON is enough to erase the feeling completely. We readers ask too much, don\'t we?...hehe. Please do keep on writing. We\'re looking forward to the next chapter. Rock on!

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