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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was sad!
So very sad!
Hope the two of them work things out very quicklly.
Very good chapter!
So very sad!
Hope the two of them work things out very quicklly.
Very good chapter!
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing chapter, great Sano & Megumi kiss, please update soon, you have to write more Sano and Megumi fics, they are phew.
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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hayah...another cliffhanger.*growl* My thoughts preempt your story, I apologize. I was expecting Sano to ravish her then and there. But then the tension building in your story is better. Loads better. Have you any idea how hard it is to restrain oneself from asking a particular author to hurry it up and get on with the next chapter already? Oh, oops, pretty please with sugar on it? heheh. Rock on.
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May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You did a execellent job, this storie is so real that you can feel in your heart the emotions that the caracters are feeling. You are a true writter
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May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, lawless-san! Quite a good read you\'ve got here. I was so surprised to reach the end of your chapters so soon... *waaah* I stumbled across your story and having never come across it before, I read what you had in one go... Nice storyline, good build-up and nice backdrop. Can\'t wait for more!! *grins* As for the SXM moments.... ano ne, such a story teasewhore! (of course, I didn\'t mean to imply that you are any kind of whore, it was just a figure of speech - don\'t hurt me!!)
Looking forward to upcoming chapters, and keep up the good work!
Looking forward to upcoming chapters, and keep up the good work!
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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good effort! It\'s very exciting. I can\'t wait to read next chapter. Don\'t forget to add more SxM interaction in next chapter. Pls update soon. Thank you very much.
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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is shaping up to be a good story! I love SxM, and this is promising to deliver not only romance, but a great plot as well. I don\'t mind the slight WAFFy-ness of the end of Chapter 9 (personally, I quite like WAFF). It\'s needed, sometimes, and you timed it very nicely.
Keep it up, and please update!
Keep it up, and please update!
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You sure do know how to sweep your readers off their feet. Whew. Definitely not too waffy. God, this waiting game is driving me insane!!! That\'s a good thing for you, coz that means that you achieved one of your objectives: you definitely got us hooked. Can\'t hardly wait for the next chapter. You\'re one of the greatest fanfic authors I have ever encountered. *Salute*
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another beautiful storie, update soon, its nice to read some Sano/Megumi fics because they are fews
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GASP! it\'s over?? grrr. update!!! >_<
nice yummy story. hope you make David VERY appealing indeed... y\'know, just to make it harder for our sexy Sano. ^.~
nice yummy story. hope you make David VERY appealing indeed... y\'know, just to make it harder for our sexy Sano. ^.~