rate_review Reviews

wtf? that was really weird... you have a very \"interesting\" mind.

i don\'t know what to say for this one. on the first hand the death didn\'t blend too well, but on the other hand the plot was great.
i\'m being polite so i don\'t discourage a fellow writer.
WHY DID BROCK HAVE TO DIE!!!!! *cries like bitch* YOU SICK MOTHER---

PLZ, ure story is good, but u have to describe the parts when ash is raped, or this is hardly an erotic story, also, it will help us to better understand wut he went through to cause such trauma in him

Was this story deleted then reposted or something? I remember reading it before... This isn\'t the only time either. I remember reading other stories by other authors then finding the same story being put up on a day that after when I first read it (ex: I\'ll read a story in January some time then in march of the next year I\'ll find that under the date it was posted just yesterday). Sorry I just felt like expanding on what seems to have happened. I\'m not trying to accuse anyone of anything.

all i can say is WOOT!!!!! heh heh heh i like brock and ash but mostly brock but i did like this storie i know im twised oh well

i read this somewhere before.................