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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woo! I loved it! But just some notes, if you can\'t figure out the double s german simble (the one that looks like a backwards B) I suggest you just spell it Weiss. Oh, and Nagi\'s last name is Naoe, not Namoe... oh, and Omi\'s is Tsukiyono, with a Y..... that\'s all I can think of, but that was wonderful! Woo! Awsomeness! Cookies and pocky for you! ^_^ Yamyams if you update soon!
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yey, please update again! the story is getting more intense and I like the way its heading. -cuddles Farfarello- Aishiteru jei-san heh
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i just finished reading all 12 chapters in one go, and I was like... wow^^. i really, really enjoyed that. good pace and storyline, and the plus side is i don\'t hate your OC :D... i just adore ran and ken sososososoooo much ^___^!
the only thing that I might protest is how quick ken turns from an angst ridden boy to his usual self (happy, adorable kenken) after ran admits he returns ken\'s feeling... but that\'s minor concern, i still enjoy this series very much :D
please write more soon! I\'m SO looking forward for the \"wet chapters\" *wink wink*
the only thing that I might protest is how quick ken turns from an angst ridden boy to his usual self (happy, adorable kenken) after ran admits he returns ken\'s feeling... but that\'s minor concern, i still enjoy this series very much :D
please write more soon! I\'m SO looking forward for the \"wet chapters\" *wink wink*
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
god I love Nagi! Yeah so any way I\'m confused but apperently I\'m supposed to be so you are doing well. Can\'t wait for more!
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeeeeyy! -hands her a plate of pocky- you update, now do so again
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sigh it\'s so sad poor Yohji. I can\'t wait to see what happens next. Oh I love Schwartz though I shouldn\'t I do. Yeah happy day!
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That\'s the END??? IT can\'t be I want more! DIE EVIL BASTARD who raped my Kenken! GO Ran for killing the evil bastard. Wow We are really mean to poor Ken. I cried for the poor Ken. I want more PLEASE! I want fluff no more angst just fluff like bunnies and sappy crappy romance novel. I love this story and I want more.
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are evil! Poor Ken! Evil prison guy hurt my Kenken and I\'ll rip of your head and feed it to the wolves because I know where to find them too!
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, I love your fic so much... it\'s beautiful. Your descriptions of the play in Ken\'s mind is definitely chaotic, but it worked very well on creating the angst and sadistic moments. I almost teared on the chapter when Ran rejected him... you wrote it so that us audience can feel such pain in Ken\'s place. It\'s wonderful ^_^ Admittingly enough, what happened to Keiko surprised me so much. And what happened to Ken in the jail is just... *sob* it\'s so cruel. But yeah, Ken\'s such a beauty. Hehehe... lovely ch.9, it\'s very settled and sweet, and RanKen getting all cuddly like that is sooooo cute. Once more, wonderful story, and I highly recommend it to others!
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I cry! My poor Kenken! I thought I was mean. Poor poor Kenken. Though I do have to admit i am rather happy to see another Ran Ken story out there. There just aren\'t enough. This story is very sad and I want to huggle Ken till he can\'t breath but that might be bad. So far I love this story even if it does make me want to cry and wow you are such a good writer! I suck! I am now going to pout in a corrner and see if I can improve my writing. You are my new hero! Why I don\'t know. It\'s late and I go crazy soon as sun goes down. So if this seems really random it is. Omi has a crush on Ken how cute. I love this story!