rate_review Reviews

The song is actually a character song, meaning to imply that Kaidou would actually sing it. @_@ I had a similar reaction the first time I heard the song therefore I <3 the concept of this fic so so much. The only thing that bothered me was in the beginning you stated that Inui was behind Kaidou and then he suddenly seemed to be in front of him. Only mistake I noticed. Overall, I enjoyed it muchly. ^_^

omgz0rz, that rocked! I was trying to explain anal sex to my friend yesterday and now I\'m SO gunna use this as an example. Whee! oh hey, whut? you and yuukisan are both good authors... hmmm... I have to research now! banzai~

YuukiSan: *glares while fanning herself* I\'m really mad at you right now. Why you might ask... because I don\'t like Inui/Kaidoh... but I love this fic! C\'mon you know how much Kaidoh frightens me... I mean look at those lips! They\'re unnatural! Not to mention the whole hissing thing *shudders* And Inui... is... Inui. With the juice and the glasses and the not having any eyes (he wears a sleeping mask for Christ sake!) he\'s creepy! Not to mention the whole un-date date thing (though that episode was hilarious. Gotta love Momo\'s perfect first date accesory... Ryoma!) I swear he\'s stalking poor Kaidoh. The only reason I read this thing was because you are my Beta and I love you to a million and one pieces, and I like it! Grrrrr, no wait hisssss! *goes and hides un-effectivly behind her beloved Ryoma who \'Mada mada dane\'s her*

NinjaMouse: Are you done ranting yet? Ok so yeah loved the fic. Loved the smut (look who your talking to here). Outtakes were great.

YuukiSan: *peering over Ryoma\'s shoulder* hey she got those ideas from me! *goes back to hiding*

NinjaMouse: No she got the ideas from you being an idiot when you get all hyper.

YuukiSan: *throws a tennis ball and NinjaMouses head... and misses. Ryoma \'Mada mada dane\'s her again*

NinjaMouse: Well I\'m going to save you from her rambles and teach her how to throw properly. She can throw a dagger... why not a tennis ball!? Oh yeah... Momo Yuukisan is hitting on your boyfriend again!

YuukiSan: EEP! *runs and hides behind Eiji*

NinjMouse: Save me DB please!

YuukiSan *pokes around Eiji\'s shoulder and both wave* Ja ne! *hides behind Eiji who is still waving*

Isn\'t it awful? It wouldn\'t be so bad if they were in high school at least. But for god\'s sakes - Ryoma\'s a decade younger than I am!

Darn Konomi, making pedophiles out of all of us! XP

Ah well - at least you\'re story helped me get through the trauma for one more day. ^.^ Great writing - the small build up is great (just to picture Ryoma laughing his ass off) and the lemon is wonderful ~ !