rate_review Reviews

Melting into a puddle with pleasure. The story is excellent!

i love it how you characterize all of them...its so fitting. In most of the FF´s you can find its so out of character you cant believe it...you made very believable story out of it.
(and finally Byakko shows that hes not just a big kitten..Big Plus for that moment XD)

Wow you update so fast! great story ^^

I\'m really loving all the dialogue you put in. It\'s making me laugh quite a bit ^_^ A small aside, though: that last part (about three paragraphs at the bottom of chapter 12) should probably be the start of chapter 13. I know you guys like to keep us on our toes, waiting for more and such, but it\'s quite a bit out of place this time. Anyway, looking forward to the next installment :)

- Kira

I may not always review your stories, but I do always enjoy them.

I never thought I\'d review like this, but...

MORE :(

- Kira

Surprise pairing indeed! Based on \"Res Judicata\" I expected Touda/Suzaku...
Well, I\'ve never reviewed your storyes before, so I have to thank you for them. I count \"Darkness Unleashed\" Arc as the best YnM fanfic. And out of it I like Shikigami storyes best (they are really left out by other authors).

mh. I approve very muchly. Actually, I\'m quiete enthralled with your style. The absolutely only thing I could utter that even comes to close to something like.. well, criticism would be too harsh a word, it\'s more like curiosity, is that Sohryu seems a bit OOC - after all he\'s supposed to hate humans pretty much all of the time.
Anyways... I was gonna ask if maaaaaaybe you\'d consider writing a story with Touda and Tsuzuki? I\'ve been looking everywhere but couldn\'t find any good stories with them and I adore Touda as we first meet him, with the chains and long hair and all... *purr*

It\'s nice to see something so sensual with actual plot and yes, the pairing is strange, in a good way.

As usual, great work. :) I completely didn\'t see that coming at all! I can\'t wait to see what you do with this story, because most of your stuff has some excellent plot twists no matter what the series. Looks like I\'m still addicted to your YnM series, much to my homework\'s dismay. Ah, such is life. Again, (I think I said this in a different review...?) your English is quite impressive. If you ever do feel the need for a beta-reader or editor, though, I offer what services I can. Keep up the good work.

- Kira Douji
(The ever addicted)