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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Darth Sidious/Emperor/Palpatine Impression* Good. Excellent. *End Impression* I like the name the most, keep it UP! HAHAHA I make pun!
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey man. You might want to do a spell check,but be sides that was the best on i've ever read.
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, your grammar sucks. Makes it very hard to understand.
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have a real talent for fanfics. This is one of the best I\'ve read this week. Keep writing fanfics, you really know how to make a good one.
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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
we NEED more Kite/Blackrose ficcys yours is like the only one
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May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey holems, this isn\'t Inuyasha, this is .hack essay! I gave you a 1 because it\'s not in the right place
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May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, wrong story, I meant to say to you that it was excellent! I gave you a 5, it\'s that other story bellow I gave the 1!
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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...This isn\'t the best BR and Kite pairing, lots of horrid misspellings, which made me skim past a lot of it. Also, they just don\'t flux...There\'s something to think about. Fluxuation. And I\'m really not sure, but is that even a real area? If not, that was a poor make, and a legend that was also not very creative. Even for the creators of .Hack//Sign.
Your sentence structure was also bad, I couldnt tell who was speaking, and I couldn\'t tell WHEN they were speaking. Sentences should really begin with \" and end with \" followed by (at least) said insert name here.
Try to improve the writing, and make an update. It\'d also work better if it were slightly longer, too. That\'s not meant to be a bad thing, either. But no one really says kool anymore but kids of 11...
Your sentence structure was also bad, I couldnt tell who was speaking, and I couldn\'t tell WHEN they were speaking. Sentences should really begin with \" and end with \" followed by (at least) said insert name here.
Try to improve the writing, and make an update. It\'d also work better if it were slightly longer, too. That\'s not meant to be a bad thing, either. But no one really says kool anymore but kids of 11...