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*sniffles* I, sort of, feel bad for Krad now! I feel like i\'m cheatin by readin this, since I only have the seventh volume of DNAngel... I love it tho! My fav pairings are, of course, Dai/Sat and Krad/Dark... ^^ I think you\'ve really got all the characters down! And no Risa or Riku in site! ^^ I\'m glad! Not many authors can pull this kind of thing off! I can\'t wait till the next chapter! ^^ I hope it\'ll be here soon!

I have problems with your other stories tho... You see, I can\'t go onto fanfiction.net anymore, since it only kills my computer with viruses... Is there any way you can maybe email them to me or put them here on adultfanfic? I haven\'t checked your author page on here yet, so if they are already on here, ignore this, but if they aren\'t could you put the two stories on here? I would really like to read them! ^^ I\'ll be happy to review them by email if you wish me to do so! ^^ Thank you!

itachi ano**

i really like this story so far... nice twist with krad in daisuke and dark in satoshi..and how satoshi sorta wishes to keep dark and get rid of krad, or not have to deal with him anymore. i like!! keep on writing please! ^_^

Great story keep it up~why is it that in every great story I read my koi*Krad* gets raped and has a bad, traumatising past?

wooooow. that was really good!! and the whole legened thing fit so well. especially the fire and ice, light and dark part! ah, it matches there hair X3 how cool. bwahaha. welp, please update for muah. Cheers!!^o^

I like this story so far.

I can\'t recall if this is slated to be an au or not. But I think it should at least be a slight au.

Considering that Kosuke is not of the Niwa blood. Emiko is. The reason why she is so obsessed with Dark and her training her son to be a theif is not only because he father was once Dark, but also because she couldn\'t be Dark.

He only showed in males of the Niwa clan, blood relatives, It is something genetic. Which is why the series is called, D.N.Angel, dna and angel.

Also Dark calls Daisuke\'s mom, Emiko-Chan, he has known her since she was little.

While he was not able to possess Emiko-Chan he was their watching her grow up. Which is why a younger Emiko-Chan was in the mirror world, as Dark\'s loves.

Also Satoshi\'s name, (that he likes to be called) is not Hikari (he hates the family), but Hiwatari, after his adobted father, the Chief of Police.

Also I don\'t think Satoshi would go to a library to find information on the painting, considering of both the Niwa and Hikair private libraries, in the houses.

I know that Satoshi lives in an apartment, but there is a main house somewhere, or something that contains the information for each artifact of the Hikari\'s.

I can\'t remember how big the Niwa library is but I know that it is downstairs somewhere, in their house.

They wouldn\'t have the precious information on the Hikari artifacts laying around just anywhere, now would they?

They would have to keep close tabs on it.

Also where is Toki-Chan, the statue who went into the Mirror with Daisuke who wanted to save Dark?

Also wasn\'t there a line that mentioned, that somehow all of the Hikari\'s work end up in the Niwa\'s hands?

I really hope that the D.N.Angel series answers the questions on the Feud.

I want to know what is up with Dark and Krad, and why the feud started in the first place.



Anyways, I love the story so far. Keep up the great work. Coolsa.

I know I\'m reviewing on my own story, but yea.

Thank You Sheridan for pointing that out.
You see I don\'t own the series, my friend does and I read them at her house.
If I make a mistake like that again please point it out.
Again Thank you.
I\'m off to change it now.

it\'s nice but you made one little mistake: \' but when it came to the Hikari’s he was much different, it had been bred into his blood to hate the family \'
kosuke doesn\'t really have anything to do with the Hikari/Niwa feud except being daisuke\'s father. emiko is the person related to the niwa family, kosuke only took on her family name so the tradition could live on.

Yeah! You finally updated! Though I had to reread the entire story because I had forgotten what it was about! I had forgotten how totally awsome if was. Please update again cause you rock!

PS. I really like the Diasuke and Satoshi pairings.....*hint hint*

AHHHHHH! I thought this was an update! ha ha ha.

Sweet!! Write more soon please! ^_____^