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for Grand Theft Auto: Nerima

by Kyva

person Scorpinac
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHOOO!!! OH YEAH!! That's the stuff!! Rot in Hell, Jasper!! Your Master's waiting for you! Whoo! Yeah, I liked that chpater, very well done, let's hear it for the Hiryu Shoten Ha! Also known as the Heaven Blast Of The Dragon! Okay, I'm guessing two more chapters, at the most, cause now we got to be in serious denoument-ville! Can't wait for what's next, and can't say I'm surprised Ranma's as bad off as he is, though I hope his eye is okay. Laters!!
person Scorpinac
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yeah, I'm getting that impending slam-bang finale feeling! Nice movement from point A to point B, and I look forward to the coming "apocaplypse"!! Bring it! Laters.
person Scorpinac
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Actually, I thought last chapter was pretty epic, but apparently it's just getting better! And, YAY!! Jerry made it! Woohoo!! What can I say, I like her, she's got moxie! And damn it, Jasper! Quothe Freddy Krueger from FVJ, "WHY WON"T YOU DIE?!" Do give us 33 ASAP, 'kay? Laters!!!
person Scorpinac
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And it sounds like all that's left is, finally, the wrap up! Farewell, Jerry, you did good girl! Not exatcly the way I would have liked to see Jasper go, but it works! And nice and humiliating, as well. Hehhehheh... Well, looking forward to the finish. Laters!
person Scorpinac
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
But why not?! We're looking *forward* to seeing him in a body bag! Well, I am.... C'mon, buddy, don't cheat us, or did you mean you're going to have Ranma do worse to him than he did to Marci's pedophilic scary nutjob kidnapper? That'd be...actuallu pretty appropriate.... I eagerly await the next chapter! Laters.
person Scorpinac
schedule June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that's alright. And I'm guessing that was Genma in the shadows, and woe to that poor taxi driver....(:o) Well, looking forward to the next one! Laters!
person Scorpinac
schedule June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, that arguably could have gone better, and it looks like Ryoga has finally paid the piper, but redeemed himself in saving both Ukyo and Akane from death by misfired bullets. Well, do what you think you must, I\'ll be waiting! Laters!
person Scorpinac
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes you do. Interesting revelations about Bugys. If he's smart, he'll never tell the gang about all that, though, or I doubt there'd be a word to describe what they'd do to him. And from the sounds of it, the former Mrs. Bugsy was a real piece of crap, too. but for Marci's sake, he let go with a warning. So, the end is nigh, huh? Well, so long as it includes Japser's painful demise, I'll be happy. Hope to see the next hunk soon. Laters!
person Scorpinac
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 22 - Frankly I Thought the fight lasted a little too long, but otherwise well done. I think they should just let Mousse believe he killed Ned(which they did, yay!), unless he's actually smart enough to figure it out on his own. Oh, well, next chap.!

Ch. 23 - An arguably very appropriate end to Mrs. Vinsfield. Nice and painful. And I'm glad you didn't actually let that Cocaine dealer live, he didn't really deserve that "mercy". Well, seems we're headed headlong into the big finish, so don't take too long, and I understand about the Turkey. (A lava lamp??)

Forgive the lateness of these reviews, things have held me up. Well, laters!
person Scorpinac
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, very nice, very nice. Marci, as always, was delightfully cute, and Ranma\'s moments with Akane, Hikori, and Jerry were priceless! And you write Mousse in the shapter ver well, too, I could really feel his mood and angst. So, he, and by proxy Shampoo, is about to get his ultimate revenge, eh? Make it hurt! I *eagerly* look forward to the next chapter! Laters!

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