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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA, I fell in love with Sheela when she fucked with Ryoga in chapter 8...That was fucking great....Not done reading though, Good stuff
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU KILLED SHEELA YOU BASTARD!
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gruesome, yet satisfying. Very Halloweenie! And a satisfactorily painful end to a true piece of shit!! To be honest, I almost expected Ranma to take the saw and pull upward at the end, you know, lop the bastard in two vertically! But that\'s okay, so long as he\'s now a Cenobite plaything! Guess Tofu\'s doing some overtime again, huh? Laters!
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What the hell can be said so far about things going down so far. Geez next thing Ryoga going to be undercover cop and the shit could get even worse. Im surpise there a all manhunt for Ranma ass for killing those five cops or that they are not looking into it. And kids remeber check for six pack you don\'t want to end up like Ranma did. For lol continue please.
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you kill poor, sweet(if albeit irascible) Marci, I swear I will make it my mission in life to hunt you down! Just kidding, but seriously, please don\'t kill her, I hate that kind of thing(I got a soft spot for kids, okay?!) Well, at least now they know what Jasper looks like! And would Mr. Palmer be the one that Mousse seeks? Wouldn\'t that be delicious irony! Don\'t take too long, okay? Laters!
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, well done, sir! Very well played! I wonder what Mr. 982 has to say? COuld it be Jasper\'s already back? Or maybe he knows the name of the man who killed Mousse\'s and Shampoo\'s child? Ooh, the suspense! Don\'t dawdle now, we want the answer ASAP! Laters!
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Actually, I thought your grammar was pretty good, really. Just a few minor errors here and there. I\'m American, born and bred, and have written some fics myself, two are at FF.net now under the screenname above if you want to look, and I wouldn\'t mind Betaing for you(and getting a sneak peak at the remaining chaps.!).
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
once again another amazing chappy! i can\'t wait to see what ya got up yer sleave next! :) keep up the super work! i\'ve been checking for ur updates daily! :)
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yo! I\'m thanking everyone for all the kick ass reviews, and thanking you all for kicking my ass to get chapters up. However it\'s time for business. My grammer sucks and I need a beta tester/reader what ever the hell you call those people that read your chapter and after finding all your mistakes, smack you with a rolled up newspaper and say \"Bad!\" Any takers? I\'ll only accept people who party hard and have a reasonable grasp of the english language.
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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see Ukyo up an about, and no, I don\'t think it\'s wrong that she still loves him. After all, she was unconscious when Ryoga did what he did, so she still has to absorb it all. As for Ryoga himself, if he is currently at the Jade Garden, I almost pity him. Laters!